DM and the Dirty 20s Part 05

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All Characters are 18 years or older.

This story is a bit of a slow burn dual-story that very much requires the reader to start from the beginning. It does not require intimate knowledge of D&D or other TTRPGs, but is very much about playing those sorts of games and the fantasy of roleplaying. The two stories are those of the Players, and their Characters. As such this story comes with a warning of having strange Point of View/Narrative hotswaps in the middle of chapters as the players around the table move in and out of character.

In this chapter you can expect rough MF and FF with some voyeurism/exhibitionism, aftercare MF, and an MMF/Group scene.

Things get dangerous as the adventurers follow through on seducing key enemies, and the girls get to experience group sex and aftercare..

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Chapter 45

"The transformation you witness is horrific," I said to Elyse. "The expressions on Alexander Houndsfang's face as it happens are both painful and euphoric. You watch as his limbs twist and snap, bones breaking as they realign and grow and find new shapes. His skin splits and shreds and regrows to cover his broader chest, his longer, thicker arms and legs. His hands, becoming massive, elongating into claws. The fur that erupts from him is black as midnight, thick and coarse until it smooths out over his wiry, corded muscles. The last part of him that changes is his face, first his teeth new ones sprout forward, his jaw elongating, his nose changing, his brow furrowing more as his ears rise into points. When the cracking and grunting and all the horrible little noises cease, the only sound left in the chamber is your hammering heartbeat and the slow, heavy breathing of the beast before you."

"Is he what I think he is?" Elyse asked, reaching out and not quite touching my bare chest, acting like she was nervous to touch the thing in front of her - I had to hand it to her, Elyse was a better actress than she seemed to know.

I'd stripped off my shirt and shorts as I described the transformation, and when I finished I pushed down my briefs and kicked them away, now fully naked with her. My cock wasn't fully hard yet, considering I'd come in Tori's mouth less than an hour ago, but it was already feeling full and heavy at the sights before me. Elyse, gloriously naked. Tori, over at the other end of the table, without pants and wearing a strap-on as Rhia, topless, was on her knees and sucking the strap-on to get it spitty and ready.

"Do you ask him?" I prompted Elyse, trying to help her be in character.

"Are you what I suspect you are?" Renee asked, her voice low and thick with her accent. She gazed up and down the beast, taking in his hulking form, his massive, clawed hands and feet, and the thick, big, but very human cock hanging between his legs. He was still humanoid, still a man in most ways, justmore than that. The clothes Alexander had been wearing were shredded from the transformation, hanging in rags where they hadn't fallen away completely.

Alexander reached forward, wrapping one big claw around the small sorceress's head and drawing her close as he leaned down. His voice was even deeper than before, like it was threatening to erupt out of him at any moment, and his words sounded strange as they were uttered through his changed mouth. "Say it," he growled.

"Werewolf," Renee hissed breathily.

"Did you for real just recreate the Twilight scene?" Rhia asked, her mouth leaving the dildo as she turned to look at us more fully. "I mean... really!?"

Elyse broke, snorting as she covered her mouth and giggled, and Tori started laughing. "It was hot until you ruined it!" Elyse said through her giggles.

"No more commenting on stuff that's happening in the other scene," I said, putting on my 'don't argue with the DM' voice. "If somethingdoes come up, call Time Out or 'DM!' for input."

"Sorry," Rhia said.

"Now get back to sucking that cock with those pretty lips," Tori grunted in her 'male' voice.

"You better get ready to eat pussy, Rolf," Rhia grunted. "Cause if you keep talkin' like that, that's all you're gonna get."

I turned my attention back to Elyse, making eye contact with her as she looked up into my eyes. I took a deep breath, and she mirrored me, and we both let them out at the same time as we tried to get back into the scene.

"You know, and yet you don't run," Alexander said, stalking around Renee. Each step was heavy even in the stone room. As he circled her he trailed the claw of one finger across her bare shoulders.

"I'm not afraid," Renee said. "Not of you, not of the beast. Would you like to know why?"

Alexander leaned in from the side drawing in a deep smell of her just as she'd done to him earlier. "I'm curious," he said.

"I am not afraid, Lord Houndsfang, because every pack leader needs a mate," Renee said, reaching forward and running her fingers along his hanging cock. It immediately responded, starting to rise. "And whether you marry the widowed Lady or not, I will bethat for you. Your trusted mate."

Houndsfang moved fast, manhandling her with aggression and shocking speed as he seized her from behind, one big claw wrapping entirely around her neck and throat while the other seized both her hands and held them behind her back. "Is that what you think you'll be?" he growled. "You think you'll be the one who can survive the lust of the Beast?"

"I know I can," Renee said simply, breathing deeply but maintaining her calm.

Again, moving fast, she was lifted from the ground and planted in front of the throne, his massive hands bending her over until she was holding armrests and her ass was thrust back at him. She spread her legs on her own, arching her back, presenting herself to him like a bitch in heat.

It was a fantastic view. Elyse really did have the nicest ass I'd ever been with. Best of the three coeds, better than Mel, Veronica and Rachel, and better than any of the few girlfriends I'd had over the years. It was the perfect mix of muscle with a layer of cushion, rounded perfectly in every way but still matching her slim frame so it didn't look out of place or fake, or like she was wearing a diaper or something. When she arched her back and spread her legs in this position it pressed her pretty pussy back, begging for attention, and it was already flowering a little with a little drool trail of her juices already on her inner thigh, she was so horny. And that perfect little virgin asshole flexed as I watched, peeking out from between those cheeks.

There was alot I wanted to do to her. I wanted to bury my face in between those thighs and slurp up her taste. Or between those cheeks and tongue her ass to show her exactly what I would do with her by the end of the summer. But those weren't things that Alexander would do, and I was nothing if not a professional Fucking dungeon master.

Across the room, Tori had transitioned to titty-fucking Rhia, which had both girls laughing, and she pulled Rhia to her feet and kissed her, then started tracing kisses down towards the brunette's breasts. Rhia gasped with a smile, then looked over at us and saw what I was doing, silently stopping Tori so they could both watch.

Alexander pressed her thick cock to Renee's cunt, running the head through her slick lips. Renee felt like it was too big - it couldn't possibly fit. Except it would, or she would quite possibly die. There would be no stopping the Beast now that she'd brought it forth and made it promises. But Alexander had a level of control that was rare in the stories of werewolves, and she felt the hair of his massive, barrel-like chest brush against her back as he leaned over her, his tool still teasing across her labia.

"Beg for it," he rumbled in her ear, and she felt the cold touch of his nose just behind her ear.

I used Elyse's half-finished bottle of beer from the table to simulate the nose, touching the bottom curve of the perspiring glass to the right spot and making her whimper a little. Then I breathed heavily with a wide mouth, letting it wash across the nape of her neck and shoulder. That was a little trick I'd come up with the first time I'd roleplayed a dragon back when Rachel had played a Bard in our second campaign of The Game with a penchant for seducing monsters to distract them while her party looted their hoards.

"Give me your cock, Alexander," Renee moaned with a full voice. "Use my body to sate your lust. Let out the beast to claim me, and make me yours."

"That wasn't begging, little sorceress," Alexander growled.

"Please use my body, Lord," Renee pleaded. "I am a servant of fate, and fate wraps around you like a cloak so I submit my body to you as tribute. My cunt, my mouth, my fuckingwomb if you need it, Lord. Please fill the hole in me that only you can fill with that giant fucking werewolf cock!"

Alexander thrust into her, hard and deep, ploughing through her cunt despite his size, and despite the fact that other than her own lubrication she hadn't been prepared with fingers or tongue. Renee threw her head back and moaned, and Alexander wrapped a claw around her throat and squeezed as his other hand raked his claws across her chest, just barely light enough not to draw blood.

I fucked Elyse hard and fast, and she made it very clear with every moan and energetic, wordless, "Ungh! Ungh! Uhuh!" that she wanted it like that. She was thrusting her ass back at me as best she could, but I was definitely the driving force.

And it was fuckinggood sex.

Elyse's pussy squeezed and felt like it almost rippled on my cock as her lean, lithe body twisted under me. Her ass smacked back with a meatythwap each time our bodies came together. I even loved how the muscles in her back flexed subtly with each thrust. I had simulated the 'raking claws' with stiff fingers grazing across her chest blindly, pressing into her tits and managing to even brush across one of her firm little nipples. Now I reached up and slid my hand up from between her shoulder blade to the back of her neck, and then higher across the undercut into her blonde hair at the back of her head, forcefully pulling her head back more so that her throat was even more exposed. I teased her with my 'stiff finger' technique there, too, making her imagine the claws at her throat.

"Oh- Oh my- Holy-" Elyse stammered. She was a vocal fucker, with lots of wordless moans and groans and whimpers and giggles, but so far she hadn't actually said anything so I had to assume this was a sign that I was doing something very right. I pulled her up to standing using my grip in her hair, still thrusting into her hard and fast, her head tilted up to the ceiling now as I held her with her back dramatically arched so she could keep pushing her ass back at me.

"Are you going to come on my cock already, little sorceress?" Alexander asked Renee. "Are you that thirsty for the promise of power at my side?"

"I'm gonna come," Elyse mumbled. "I'm- Fuck, Shane- I'm mean Alexander. I'm gonna- Ffffff-"

I let go of her hair and she let her head drop forward a little, reaching back with her arms to grab mine and hold herself upright as her body went rigid as the shock of her orgasm travelled through her. Being a bit of a bastard, since Alexander and his Beast wouldn't stop, I didn't change my somewhat frantic pace of fucking her as that helped keep her in her state of excruciating bliss. Her stiffness had her start tilting away and only her grip on my arms may have kept her upright.

Suddenly Elyse sucked in a gasping, raw breath and let go, falling forward to hold the edge of the table as she sucked in air, her body relaxing except for the panting.

I didn't let up, though, and I pushed her further up onto the table until her hips were at the edge and her entire naked torso was pressed to the smooth wooden top. This let me grab one of her thighs and lift it up, getting her knee onto the table and opening her up at a slightly different angle, deepening my strokes.

"Fuck, Elyse," Tori said. "Your sex faces are so fucking hot."

"Wha-? No, don't watch me," Elyse said, covering her face.

"No commentary from the peanut gallery," I reminded them.

"Sorry!" Tori said. "I just- Elyse, hon, look so fuckinghot with how much you're loving that dick. Shane, you're, like, blowing her mind."

"I know I make weird sex faces," Elyse said. "Well, at least when I'm getting myself off. I don't think I did it with my exes."

"Probably 'cause you didn't get off with them properly," Rhia said. They'd been mid-transfer when Tori had interrupted us with her comment. Now she sat up on the table, having taken off her chainmail skirt, and spread her legs and pulled Tori between them by the dildo. I wasn't going to be able to see the action, but I had more than enough on my hands. "But seriously, Tori is right," Rhia continued. "If pornstars madethose kinds of faces, looking seriously blissed out like that? Damn, it would be printing money."

Elyse was blushing hard and shot the two of them a middle finger. I'd slowed my strokes during the conversation since we weren't 'in scene' for the moment. Now I buried myself deep into her and stilled, leaning down and giving Elyse a kiss on the shoulder. "All good?" I asked.

She let out a breath and turned the other way to look over her shoulder at me without facing Tori and Rhia. "Yes," she said. "God, better than good. Shane, your cock- Fuck. I don't think I've ever come that hard in mylife. And the thing with your fingers- and the bottle thing? I felt like I wasliving the scene. That's so fuckinghot, but also I'm here doing this with you, in front of them, andthat's hot. Fucking hell, man. I'm- Can we keep going? Please?"

I chuckled and gave her another long, slow stroke out and then back in to bury deep, eliciting a long, pouting moan from her. "Of course we can," I said. "But it was an intense kick off, and since we got interrupted I thought I'd use it to check in. Now that I know you're good-"

I was cut off by Rhia groaning as she laid back on the table, her tits pointed to the ceiling deliciously, while Tori started to experiment with how to best do the hip motions necessary to thrust with the strap-on.

"-Now that we're on the same page," I continued. "Is there any position you want to get into the scene?"

"I want to fucking ride you," Elyse said, working her hips in little circles to grind my cock in her. "I want to bounce on your dick and show it how much I love it carving into me."

"Got it," I chuckled, then leaned down and kissed her cheek before pressing my lips to her ear. "And they're right, your sex faces are amazing. I almost lost my shit there right before you came and might have pumped you full of cum."

She whimpered at the thought, and as I pulled away she gave me a needy look.

Yeah, I knew how to play up a kink. That's what twenty years of group sex and roleplay experience got me.

Chapter 46

The girls really were right, Elyse's sex faces were fucking sexy. She was so damnexpressive, she made me feel like I really was blowing her mind, melting her brain or some other ridiculous way of describing fucking fantastic sex. My favourite was when her eyes would go really wide, like my cock was filling her up so much that they were going to bug out of her head as her jaw dropped open, but right up on that expression's heels were the 'one-eyed, slack jawed twitch' and the 'eye fluttering, lip bite seizure.'

Tori still hadn't really figured out the right hip movements to work the strap-on, unfortunately. It was weird how some women, both in porn and in real life, could pick it up naturally, otherwise could learn it, but some just couldn't figure it out at all. Veronicanever used one in the Game because she just couldn't get her hips to 'do the thing,' as she liked to say, despite years of prior attempts.

To be honest, it was a little reassuring that a young, gorgeous, talented woman like Tori could be bad atsomething.

This lack of decent thrusting led to them switching things up and Tori sitting in a chair while Rhia mounted her in cowgirl. Again, I couldn't see much, but I knew they were making out as Rhia worked her hips and rode the dildo. Her ass was hidden by the table, and her tits were pressed to Tori's chest, so all of my attention was on my current partner.

Elyse and I, meanwhile, had gotten back to our energetic fucking.

I'd spent another few minutes pounding her from behind once we were back in character, raking her back and thighs with my stiff fingers. She loved the angle change after I'd raised her one knee up onto the table and went through another delicious orgasm before I backed off, pulling my cock from her cunt and giving her perfect ass a nice, clean spank. That got an urgent moan out of her as she raised up from the table, her eyes blinking wide as the shock of it broke her out of the tail end of her orgasmic bliss.

"DM!"

That broke my concentration and I looked over to Rhia and Tori. Rhia was leaning around to look at me without having gotten off of Tori's dildo, one big boob exposed delightfully as she used a hand on the table edge to stay upright.

"What's up?" I asked, a little annoyed at the interruption of my transition.

"Can I cast the Ceremony spell while I'm fucking Rolf, but modify it?" Rhia asked.

"Modify how?" I asked back. "That's a big question."

"What if I do the Dedication thing, where they're supposed to get a bonus for promising to serve my god for 24 hours, but instead it's more of like a mild charm person where Rolf will feel extra-attracted to me for the next 24 hours?" Rhia asked.

I let out a little sigh, closing my eyes for a moment as I tried to get my brain on mechanics again. "Do you have the twenty-five gold worth of powdered silver dust you need to cast the spell?"

"Uh..." Rhia said. "... No?"

"Then no," I said. "You're going to need to use your pussy and your words like everyone else to make a man fall in love with you."

"Cook me dinner, my stomach can be convinced," Tori chuckled.

"Play it out in the scene, and Tori can give me a rating on how well you do and you can roll after," I said. "Now let me get back to this?"

Rhia gave me a thumbs up and turned back to Tori as they got back into their scene.

"Ride me," Alexander ordered Renee as the behemoth of a werewolf sank to the floor. "Prove you're worth my time."

Renee stumbled back from the throne where she'd been getting fucked and stood over Alexander before dropping down, balancing with one hand on his thick, hairy chest as she squatted on the balls of her feet and reached between her legs to pull his cock into position. The thick, veiny tool was slick with her juices and she was tempted to take it into her mouth, but he'd given her an order and she wasn't willing to risk non-compliance at this point.

Plus she really wanted that cock splitting her open again.

Renee sat back on the cock, feeling her pussy stretch to accommodate it, and closed her eyes as she sank down, and down, feeling like it went forever.

"Ride, I said," Alexander growled, raking her ass with his claws in that way that made her feel each dangerous point of the, but didn't quite break the skin. She might be covered in welts in the morning, or bruises, from the power in those claws but no blood was spilt. His control of his Beast was astounding.

The sorceress began to bounce on his cock, losing herself to the fucking once more.

With Elyse on top and facing me, I got the full display of her expressions and I was a little worried I could fall in love with her. She bounced up and down on my cock in an impressive display of athleticism - not enough people appreciated that there were some positions that porn had popularised that were damn difficult for the average person to do. Elyse was basically doing low squats on me, over and over, with just one hand touching my chest for balance. And she did them with perfect rhythm, not faltering at all even though I knew her thighs and calves would have to have started burning already. Most women could do the same position on their kneesmuch easier.

So I took the need for her to push away from her, reaching up with one hand and wrapping it around her throat. That got her attention, and I silently adjusted her stance so she was on her knees instead of the balls of her feet. Then I put my other hand on her hip. "Rotate," I growled in the Alexander voice, and guided her to swivel her hips like she was dancing the salsa. My hand at her throat pulled her forward a little more to lean over me, which then gave me the room to be able to brace my feet on the floor and thrust up into her.

Elyse's eyes glazed over on the second thrust as she lost all coherent thought.

The effort on my part was more than worth it to watch her melt into an orgasm that made her lose her balance and fall face-first against my chest as she clung to my shoulders with clawed hands. I'd needed to let go of her throat as she did it, so I brought both my hands back to grab that fucking fantastic ass and mauled it as I thrust up into her until I ran out of steam and my own legs were burning from the effort.

Renee managed to blink herself out of her stupor as Alexander rolled her off of him. Perhaps it was the movement, or perhaps it was his cock slipping from her cunt where it felt like it had carved out a cave and made itself a home. She shook her head, trying to find her wits again, but the Beast hadn't been satiated yet.

"Up," Alexander ordered, grabbing her hips and hauling them up so she was on her knees instead of her stomach. She went to rise onto her hands as well, but he stood over her and one big clawed hand pressed her head down against the cold stone floor, keeping her with her ass in the air. His cock dragged across her ass and for a moment she froze, wondering if the Beast was going to be trying somethingnew, but that magnificent monster cock slid lower and pressed through the slick, used folds of her cunt and speared into her once more.

"Huuuuungggh," Renee moaned. This position, as the monster fucked down into her, got himso deep. And on the third thrust her balls slapped against her clit, sending a jolt of pleasure spiking through her.

"You've done well, little sorceress," Alexander growled, looming down over her as he continued to slowly pummel his cock deep into her with forceful thrusts. "So now I'll make use of you properly and fill you with my spend. And if it quickens in you, you'll be my mate until your body fails. And it will fail eventually, as I will need many sons and daughters."

Elyse gasped. I'd grabbed her arms and held them over her head, pinned to the floor. The angle of fucking wasamazing for both of us, but a little acrobatic on my part with me basically leaning over her and making a triangle with my body and the floor. That meant I couldn't thrust into her fast, but that wasn't needed. I was damn fucking close to popping, and Elyse had moved into an orgasmic river, just riding the current.

"OK, I'm just sayin', I'm not into the whole breeding thing but that's still kinda hot," I heard Tori say from somewhere. They must have finished their scene at some point and were watching us.

"Bend me over and put a werewolf baby in me, I say," Rhia chuckled. "Kinda hot nothing. Look at her, she's got multi-platinum orgasmic."

They both giggled softly, trying not to interrupt our moment, but I glanced up from Elyse to see they were both sitting on the edge of the table, idly playing with themselves as they watched. Rhia grinned and gave me a thumb's up when she noticed me looking, and Tori blushed but licked her lips and slid two fingers into her pussy.

"Now," I grunted, and one thrust later I began to unload into Elyse.

"Yeeeeaaaaahhh," my vocal little partner moaned as her eyes rolled up. Her cheek was pressed to the floor and she bit her shoulder since I still had her arms pinned over her head. Before the second rope of my cum could rocket out of me like a hose that suddenly unclogged she peaked again, her body clenching and stiffening. This included her cunt, and my cock was suddenly balls deep in a vice that could only have been made in heaven as it gripped on all sides with its soft, slick walls.

Six ropes, I shot into her, and I wondered if maybeI had a bit of a breeding kink or something because I came more than usual and I'd already shot once that afternoon. The wonderful ache of the release built and ran through me and I couldn't help but grunt in an animalistic, primal way as I unloaded.

Elyse collapsed underneath me, her body going slack and wilting under my weight, and I rode her down to the floor until I was lying on top of her, our sweaty bodies both gasping for breath.

"Holy. Fuck," Elyse mumbled.

"Pretty fuckin' amazing," I grunted, my cock slowly wilting inside of her.

She rolled under me a little, turning at the waist so she could kiss me with hungry lips as she fed me her tongue and moaned. Then she collapsed back onto her stomach, her head cradled on her crossed arms since I'd let them go.

I groaned as I pulled out of her and sat up on my knees. She rolled over onto her back, stretching like a cat and giving me an amazing look at her lithe body again, before she went loose.

"That," she declared, her eyes closed. "Was the best sex I'll ever have. I'm sure the rest of the sex this summer will max out the top 10 for the rest of my life, but that was number 1 for sure. It's all downhill from here."

Tori and Rhia both started chuckling, and I grinned at the compliment before sliding my hand across her stomach and up over her little breast. I'd spent barely any time on them at all and that was a shame.

"Alexander leaves Renee on the floor," I said. "And gets up to go resume his seat on the throne. You can hear his heavy breathing, the only sound in the room, until there's an odd cracking and groaning as his body begins to transform back into his fully human form instead of the strange hybrid werewolf he was. What do you want to do?"

Elyse didn't stir, her eyes closed in thought.

"Elyse?" I asked.

"Oh my God, you fucked her so good she fell asleep," Rhia giggled.

"Well," I said and blew out a long breath. "I guess Renee is too exhausted to try anything"

"What do we do now?" Tori asked.

"Now, we get cleaned up," I said. "It's aftercare time. You two can shower in the bathroom where you change, I'll take Elyse upstairs to the other one. Talk about what happened between you two, and check in emotionally. Make sure you know what you liked and didn't like. Communicate, OK?"

"Yes, Mr Sex-pert," Rhia said with a grin.

"Oh, I like that," Tori chuckled. "I was going to make a joke about him having a Doctorate in Cunnilingus."

"Dr Sex-pert," Rhia laughed.

I rolled my eyes. "That's Dr Sex-pert, DM to you two." I leaned down to Elyse, giving her a kiss on the cheek. "Elyse, baby," I said softly. "Time to wake up. You're sticky and sweaty and need a shower."

"Mmmfdon't wanna," Elyse mumbled, slowly waking back up.

"We're going to shower together. I'm gonna wash every inch of your body," I said.

Elyse blinked her pretty grey eyes open. "I'm up," she mumbled. "I'm moving."

"Little slut," Tori laughed.

Chapter 47

Elyse groaned softly as she rolled her head back and let the water in my shower beat against her upper chest. It was coming down over my shoulder and I was sliding my hands, slippery with body wash up her stomach and sides to her cute little tits.

"This is fucking amazing," she whispered, breaking into a little grin.

"How are you feeling?" I asked.

She took one of my hands in her and lowered it down her body towards her pussy, directing my fingers to her labia as her grin turned playful and naughty. "Does that answer your question?" she asked, her eyes still closed.

I leaned in and kissed the side of her exposed neck, letting the water hit my back. "Yes and no," I murmured into her ear, my fingers softly massaging her pussy like she wanted while I continued to 'wash' her side with the other. I pivoted around her a little, giving her lips a little kiss and then kissing the other side of her neck. She felt my cock, mostly soft but still a little chubbed up and hanging forward, brush against her stomach and she found it with both hands and gave it a playful stroke. "Seriously, Elyse," I said. "How are you feeling about downstairs? The sex, the scene. Doing it in front of the others. The fact that I came inside of you?"

She opened her eyes and looked at me, blinking once as she focused. "I am completely happy," she said. "It was amazing. Every part of it. I'm still tingling in my toes a little, and I might be fucking high. Is your cum a stimulant? Cause I feel like I'm fucking high."

I chuckled and shook my head. "No, as far as I know, my cum isn't a stimulant."

"So I can't OD on it?" she asked, smirking again as she started to stroke my cock, obviously intent on teasing back its hardness.

"No, you can't," I said, letting go of her body and catching her wrists in my hands, pulling them away from my cock and spreading them out to our sides. "But I'm not playing with you again until after we do a proper check-in."

She breathed in deeply through her nose, her eyes fastened on mine, and let it out slowly. "What do you want me to say?" she asked.

"I don't want you to say anything specific, I want you to tell me what you're feeling," I said.

"Shane," she said. "What I'm feeling is on cloud nine, OK? Your cock inside me, you fucking me, your hands all over me - it was all amazing. I want more. Lots and lots more. I feel emotionally safe and vulnerable with you, and honestly, I want to sleep over here tonight becauseGod I want to wake up to you fucking me, but I know I can't do that at least because the girls would either get just a little judgy or a little jealous, or probably a bit of both. So since I can't do that will youplease trust me that I'll tell you if something gives me the ick or makes me uncomfortable?"

I pursed my lips. "I'm being a bit much, aren't I?"

"A sweet, caring man, but yes, a bit much," she said. "We aren't kids. Trust us, trustme, when we say something the first time. OK?"

"OK," I said.

She stepped forward just a little, my cock pressing against her belly and his nipples grazing my abdomen as she looked up at me with a smile, but then her expression turned thoughtful. "How areyou doing?" she asked. "Is the twenty questions routine because you're projecting?"

"I'm-" I started, but stopped myself to really think about my answer. I had to give her the courtesy of that when it was what I was kind of demanding in return. "I'm extremely grateful that I get to experience this with you and the others. And I'm still a little shocked that the three of you want to do this, and with me. And... I'm getting a weird feeling of Deja Vu."

"Because you've showered with a cute blonde with little tits who desperately wants more of your cock?" she asked with a playful smirk and quirk of her eyebrow.

"No," I said. "Because the first time I did this 'sex D&D' thing I was your age. And that both makes me feel young again, but also reminds me I've got a whole generation between us."

"And what if that's one of the many things Ilike about this?" she asked. "Wait - you started Sex D&D when you were our age? Does that mean- Ho-ly Fucking Shit."

"Um," I said dumbly, realising that I'd given away a lot more information than I intended.

"You do this with your regular group," Elyse guessed. "Like, yourregular game is The Game. With Rhia's parents. You bang Rhia's mom. You'vebeen banging Rhia's Mom for like, a couple decades."

I couldn't find words. I couldn't refute it, and I didn't want to confirm it.

"That's so fuckinghot," Elyse said and then bit her lip. "Fuck, Melissa is hot as hell for a suburban Mom. Dude, that's so awesome. And I guess her Dad is OK with it? And the other couples? Fuck!"

"You don't find it...?" I asked, not sure which descriptor to fill in. Weird? Disgusting? Deviant?

"I think it's fucking awesome," Elyse said, slipping her wrists from my hands and raising hers to put them flat on my chest. "You have amazing, long-time friends who you have a deep, personal connection with. Deep connections, based on this dick." She grinned, scrunching up her nose as she said it. "If I can have friendships likethat, I'll be a happy woman for the rest of my life."

I let out a sigh, wrapping my arms around her and pulling her close into a full-body hug. "As long as the others feel the same way, you'll have it, Elysa," I said. "I can't wait to get to know you better and better."

She hugged me back, pressing her cheek to my chest and taking a deep breath. "This might be the best fucking relationship I've ever had and we aren't even dating or seeing each other," she said. "Thank you for being my Dungeon Master."

I chuckled and kissed the top of her head. "Careful who you say that to in the future, it has a very different connotation in the kink space."

"Mmm, lock me up and flog my ass, Dungeon Master," she chuckled.

"You dirty, dirty girl," I murmured.

She pushed away from me a little, looking up at me. "Kiss me, Dungeon Master?" she asked quietly.

I kissed her, soft and sweet, leaving her lips smiling happily.

"Now, may Iplease suck your cock, Dungeon Master?" she asked.

"Only if I can eat you out after, naughty girl," I said.

"Yes. Please," she grinned, and I helped her slide down to her knees.

Chapter 48

"You smell like Shane," Rhia laughed, burying her face in the back of Elyse's hair and taking a big whiff.

"Well, I only had my soap and shampoo upstairs," I said. "I keep the lady stuff down here in case a guest needs it."

"I like it," Elyse said with a grin, pulling a lock of her hair around and giving it a sniff. "It's like wearing his sweater and smelling him on it, except I'm not stealing his clothes."

The girls had brought a vegan lasagna this week, along with homemade sourdough bread and a chocolate pudding for dessert. The funny thing about the whole dinner was that the state of undress around the table had felt totally natural. Elyse and I had headed upstairs completely naked and sweaty, so she'd come down equally naked after I'd dried her with a fluffy towel upstairs. She'd slipped on her 'robe' from her Renee costume but hadn't even bothered to tie the belt, the silky black material frequently slipping to reveal a nipple or peek lower as we sat at the table.

Rhia had put on a bra and thong panties, but both of them were half see-through so she wasn't exactly covering up. Tori, still surprising me with how cavalier and daring she could be when she wanted, went topless and just wore her baggy costume pants low on her hips. I'd almost felt overdressed, wearing a pair of athletic shorts.

The casual nudity was even more casual than I'd ever hosted for The Game. Tantalising costumes had occasionally come up, especially for games hosted on Halloween or other holidays. And there was that year I ran a Christmas One-shot and the ladies all dressed up as sexy Christmas Elves. But usually, things were aboutthe game. This all felt... extra.

Good extra, but still extra. Different.

"Are we going back to the game after we clean up?" Tori asked, giving a stretch that had her utterly perfect breasts lifting tantalisingly. Her little hopeful grin and glance towards the backyard were cute as hell. "Or... I'm just saying, the hot tub isright there."

I chuckled and shook my head. "We can hot tub if you ladies want to hot tub."

It didn't take much more than that to have me banished outside to get the hot tub space set up while the girls cleaned up the kitchen. By the time it was up to temp, they were parading out of my house and into the little enclosed area completely in the buff - and I got naked kisses from each of them as they passed me. Elyse was first, setting the precedent, throwing her arms around my neck to pull me down into a quick, close-lipped kiss as she grinned. Then came Rhia, who stuck her tongue out playfully before going on her toes and giving me a peck on the lips while her full, heavy breasts grazed against my chest. Tori was last, biting her lip and smirking a little, and she put two fingers on my jaw to ask me to come down to her. Tori's kiss was the deepest, a little bit of tongue teasing against my lips before she danced away and climbed up the stairs and into the hot tub.

With a shake of my head, I slipped my shorts down and immediately rolled my eyes as Elyse gave me a wolf whistle.

Once we were all settled under the hot water and had gotten our comfortable groans of appreciation out of the way, Rhia laughed, spreading her arms out wide on the edge of the tub. This brought her chest up, her breasts bobbing in the water as she gave us all a playful smirk. "So what took you guys so long in your shower upstairs?" she asked.

"Just doing our check-in," I said. "Which I hope you twoactually did as well?"

"Oh, we're good," Tori said. "I mean, Rhia's my little bitch now, but-"

"I amso not your bitch," Rhia snickered. "You're gonna need to be way better with a strap-on before I take on that role."

Tori stuck out her tongue at her, making us all laugh.

"Seriously though," I continued. "Did you get some time to cool down and make sure you're good?"

"We did, Dr Sex-pert," Rhia said. "But you're avoiding the question."

"Oh, we checked in," Elyse grinned, then bit her lip and gave me steamy eyes for a moment. "And it was really good."

"Oh my God, you two totally fucked again," Tori said.

"What's shower sex like, I've never done it but I feel like it would be hot?" Rhia asked excitedly.

"Well, we didn't havesex-sex," Elyse said. "After we did our check-in Imight have gotten on my knees and started sucking him off, though."

"So I'm the only one who hasn't blown you today?" Rhia asked me with a look in her eye.

"That wasn't all we did, though," Elyse said. "Once he covered my face in cum and then washed it off me he had me stand up and kissed meso good while he fingered me. Then he pushed me against the wall of the shower and got behind me and ate me from behind like a fucking demon. I swear, it felt like his tongue was huge. And he even ate my ass a bit."

"Fuck, that's hot," Tori sighed. With the lights on and the jets off I could tell that both she and Rhia had dropped hands down to their pussies underwater and were playing with themselves.

"How hard did he make you come?" Rhia asked.

"Well, I came three times," Elyse grinned. "The first one was while he was eating me, and then the second one was while he was tonguing my butt and fingering me. The third one..." she blushed, giving me another one of those steamy looks. "Well, let's just say that our Shaney has a really creative, dirty mind and he knew just what to whisper in my ear while he fingered me with one hand and spanked my ass with the other."

"That sounds so fucking hot," Rhia groaned, dropping her other hand beneath the water to join the first between her legs.

"Why not fuck, though?" Tori asked.

"Because shower sexisn't that great," I said. "Playing in the shower can be lots of fun, but actual sex? Even if you make sure you've got all the best gription and handholds possible, you're still combating cramped quarters and worrying about slipping. And then there's the fact that waterisn't that great for natural lubrication and can make it not feel great - and counteracting that with water-resistant lube just makes the 'slip and hit your head' risk worse."

"Well there goes one sex bucket list item," Rhia chuckled.

"Not for me," Tori snickered. "I want the Elyse treatment as soon as I can get it."

"Hey, it'smy turn, you both got to go," Rhia grinned, sliding from her seat and starting to cross the hot tube towards me.

"Hold on, Rhiannon," I said, putting out both my hands to stop her. "Despite the wonders of you three hanging around half and fully naked, I'm still two decades older than you three. I've already popped three times tonight and I've got to be able to function tomorrow morning. We should try to pace ourselves."

Rhia blew out a breath that turned into a bit of a raspberry, giving me a pouty look.

"Aw, Rhia not happy," Elyse said, putting on a cavewoman voice. "Rhia thinking of throwing Shane over shoulder and carrying him into cave for fucky-fucky."

That made Rhia snort hard and smirk as she rolled her eyes and sat back in her seat. "Maybe I am, but if theold man is giving up for the night, I guess I shouldn't break him."

Truth be told, I could have probably gone again. I would have also regretted it in the morning - we'd overdone it plenty of times during extended scenes in The Game and over the years we'd learned our limits and when we were willing to go beyond them. The thing was, despite Rhia being the instigator of all this, and how utterly fucking stunning she was between her body and her sweet, sometimes sarcastic personality, I was still getting hung up on our previous relationship. So far the things we'd done had crossed lines, but notthe line. Notpenetration.

I just wasn't sure what would happen, with me and with her, when that came around. And this wasn't in the game, this wasn't her character here in front of me in the hot tub, it was just her. That I wasn't ready for.

"This 'old man' will remember that statement," I replied with a little smirk of my own. "But one thing we allshould talk about was how you three feel about the fact that you've participated in group sex for the first time."

"That wasn't group sex," Tori said. "That was just... regular sex and lesbian sex within view of each other."

I smiled a little and chuckled, shaking my head. "You might be surprised, having grown up with porn more accessible than my generation, that for most people thatis group sex. Partners who aren't usually partners having sex close to each other, able to watch and experience each other. Not all group sex is a big orgy where everyone does everything with each other."

"That makes sense," Elyse said. "I mean, I definitely was half-watching you girls while you were working through your scene. It actually helped me not get overwhelmed by me getting fucked by a werewolf with a giant cock."

Tori coughed, covering her mouth with her forearm, and then grinned. "You mean Renee getting fucked by a werewolf?"

Elyse shrugged. "I'm Renee, and Renee is me," she said. "I dunno, call me method or whatever, but the only reason I wasn't totally lost in the idea of the scene was getting to watch you guys too."

"No, I get that," Rhia said. "Being your character and all. It's like us talking in character instead of saying 'Oliva says' first. We're improv acting and improv fucking. I know I was trying to be Olivia, even if I had Tori's pretty face and sexy tits to look at instead of a hairy bandit lieutenant."

"You're so sweet," Tori giggled.

"I liked the group element if that's what we're calling it. Knowing you guys could see us, and getting to see Elyse have her mind blown were both big turn-ons. I'm excited for my turn," Rhia said.

"Well, I have to admit I was nervous getting things started, but nervous in a good way," Tori said. "And I was more nervous about getting eaten out than I was about sucking your dick, Shane. I dunno why."

"Because your cooch was out," Elyse chuckled. "Sucking his dick, it'shis dick that's on display and you're just doing stuff to it. Him eating you makesyou the centre of attention."

"That might be it," Tori blushed and shrugged.

"Well, just to throw it out there - and I feel like it goes without saying, but sometimes it's important to say this kind of thingbecause it doesn't get said enough - all three of you are gorgeous young women," I said. "And so far the sex has been fantastic."

"Damn straight," Elyse grinned.

"What I mean is that I want you all to know I appreciate the bonus eye candy going on, but I feel very privileged to share some intimate moments with you," I continued, shaking my head and chuckling at Elyse. "Tori, the mutual oral earlier was great. You kept character really well, and you were super sexy taking control of what you wanted. Great job on that. And your pussy is delicious, by the way."

Tori barked a laugh, covering her mouth as she did it, not knowing how to react to that.

"Elyse... well, we already talked about it," I said.

"Please, talk some more," the blonde grinned at me. "Remind me."

"Little brat," I chuckled, making her scrunch up her nose and blow me a kiss. "I had a very good time getting my hands and lipsall over your sleek, sexy body. And your tight littlebratty cunt leaks golden ambrosia when I treat it right."

"Mmmm," Elyse moaned softly, closing her eyes. "See, I told you guys he's got great dirty talk skills."

"What's better on the taste scale, 'delicious' or 'golden ambrosia?" Rhia chuckled.

"Sounds like she peed on him to me," Tori snickered.

"Not what I meant," I said flatly.

"I didnot pee on him," Elyse stated.

I sighed as Rhia and Tori both broke into giggles, followed shortly by Elyse. The sounds of their laughter, three perfectly comfortable and sexually satisfied college-aged women, wasn't a chorus I would have thought to ever hear again after my friends and I graduated from college ourselves.

It was really fucking great.

Chapter 49

"Hey," I said, answering the door.

"Morning," Melissa sighed, trudging in out of the rain and letting me help her take her coat off.

"Jeez, want a towel?" I asked as I shook her coat.

"... Yeah," she snorted. "It's raining Cats and Dogs out there."

I dipped into the game room and grabbed one of the towels out of the bottom drawer, bringing it back to her. She quickly started drying her hair and I glanced away. She was wearing a thin t-shirt and based on the jiggle of her breasts they weren't currently burdened with a bra.

"Double?" I offered as I headed for the kitchen.

"Why, got a lot to talk about?" she asked as she followed me.

"No, because it's a miserable day and the longer we drink coffee the longer we can both procrastinate getting back to real life."

"Double me up then," she chuckled. I poured our mugs and set the coffee maker up to spit out another couple of cups worth. I handed her one of the mugs after prepping it the way she liked and sat down across the table from her. "So," she said after taking a big sniff of the coffee and her first satisfying sip. "Did you fuck my daughter last night?"

I coughed, managing not to splutter in my coffee as I was taking my first sip. That made her laugh, and I glared at her as I caught my breath. "Evil," I accused. "Pure evil."

"Oh, come on. How did you not see that coming?" she cackled.

"Fuck off," I sighed, snorting softly and shaking my head.

"I know you didn't," Mel said. "Rhia told me everything that happened last night. Dan begged off wanting to hear - he's come around to understanding that his daughter is going to know about what we're doing in The Game but doesn't want the graphic details of what's happening in her Game. But you got to play with Toriand Elyse, you dog."

I sighed heavily. "Rhia apparently hasn't acted on the thing I mentioned about this whole thing where you and her share details," I said.

Mel frowned. "What's that? She didn't say anything."

"That she's not just sharing her own secrets," I said. "She's also sharing Tori and Elyse's secrets."

Mel grimaced a little and I could tell she hadn't put thought into that either. "You want her to tell the other two about The Game," she guessed. "So that the communication is open to everyone that it's happening."

"Better they find out now than later," I said.

"Rhia," Mel scoffed softly, shaking her head. "No, she definitely hasn't done that yet."

"Well, she doesn't have long until it comes back to bite her. Or us. If she doesn't do it, I'll have to," I said.

"OK. I'll put a bug in her ear from my side," Mel said, then took a bigger sip of her coffee. "So how was fucking a couple of college coeds again?" she asked, pivoting back to the previous topic.

I rolled my eyes. "I only fucked one of them."

"So far," Mel smirked. "You're not gonna get tired of us old maids now that you've got hot young things climbing all over you, are you?"

"You think a hot young thing can make up for two decades of sexual chemistry?" I asked.

"People cheat on their spouses for stupider reasons," she pointed out.

"People who cheat don't maintain a twenty-year exclusive group of sexual partners that have also saved the world and battled all manner of evils," I counter-pointed.

"So you're not replacing us old maids, then?" Mel asked with a twinkle in her eye.

"I couldn't if I wanted to, and hell no I don't want to," I said.

"Good. Because it's Game night this week," she grinned.

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Danitha moaned as the thick minotaur cock pulsed inside of her. The dwarven druid had assured her friends that she could handle scouting the Eastern Pass herself - she'd done such things before and had travelled extensively both in her natural shape and many of the wild ones that she could now harness. Whether as a lizard, fish, mammal or bird, Danitha could pass unnoticed through the world.

Except this time, on the edge of the Dark Lord's northern border, she'd gotten careless. Eagles were not natural to the passes here above the black desert in the Cragholme Mountains. Vultures were the dominant bird of prey, scavengers that could pick the bones from the dead before they rose at night to patrol once more for their necromantic masters. But Danitha valued beauty and speed over stealth, and now she was paying the price. She'd flown too low, avoiding any spying eyes that might have seen her flying high in the sky, and the rock that had come flying from the cave mouth had knocked her out of the air and out of her wild shape.

She'd hit the ground hard and rolled, and by the time she'd come to her senses, the beast had been upon her.

"Uh-oh," he chuckled in his strangely deep but reedy way of speaking. "It looks like mine bruder has come back from his hunt. He shall vant a piece of you too, little cocksleeve."

A big, meaty hand grabbed Danitha by the hair on the top of her head and raised it. First, she saw the thick knob of another minotaur cock dangling in front of her, followed by the veiny shaft, and then she was looking up its big, muscular body into its curious, predatory face.

The minotaur pressed his cockhead to her lips and she refused to open them.

"Now now," the new one said. "Open zat pretty little mouth, cocksleeve, or I vill be forced to open it for you."

My eye contact with Rachel showed me she was desperately enjoying the play, and she 'reluctantly' opened her mouth so that I could slide my cock into it in a couple of strokes. Dan was grinning, his cock sunken into her from the other end as she was on her hands and knees on the floor next to the game table.

"Oh, look at these poor little mortals," Mel cackled in a singsong voice from the other scene on the other side of the room. "All ours to feast upon!"

"And feast we shall!" Veronica giggled in a high-pitched squeak.

Jack and Aaron were 'tied' to their chairs - it hadn't been a planned thing, so we'd used the brown-coloured bungee cords I kept for these sorts of 'hostage' moments - and had 'gags' in their mouths to keep them from speaking, though they could have spit them out at any time. Horus and Jackal, their rogue and ranger characters respectively, had been scouting the more northern fork of the Eastern Pass when they'd fallen into the Mountain Siren trap. The sirens usually lured their victims off of a sheer cliff and picked at the remains below, but Jackal's Winged Boots had kept him aloft when he failed his check against their song and Horus had rolled to break the spell just in time to catch Jackal's waist - the two of them had flown right up to the Siren's nest much to the Harpy-like monster's delight. I'd set Mel and Veronica to playing the Sirens, who would 'get what they wanted' out of the adventurers and, if they were pleased with the results, would let the two go.

Not wanting Rachel and Dan to be left out of the fun, Rachel's character Danitha had run into her own problems.

"You vant a turn vith this side?" Dan asked me, using the ridiculous Germanic-ish accent he'd spontaneously decided the minotaurs spoke in. "She is quite tight, but ist good, yeah." He was sliding a little into a ridiculous Swedish. At any point, I was expecting to hear about how we were going to 'pump... you up!'

"Happy to trade, mine bovine," I said in the same silly accent, offering him a fist bump. He returned it and then pulled his cock out of Rachel, picking her up bodily and spinning her around. Rachel was the smallest of the three women in The Game and all the guys knew she loved getting manhandled around. She let out a moan and immediately got her mouth on Dan's cock, arching her back and wiggling her ass at me. I speared into her presented pussy, clapping my hands down on her ass cheeks as I started to drill her.

"Now, now, boys," Veronica was saying, circling behind the chairs of the other two men. She had grabbed a big, silly sex toy feather from one of the toy drawers and was teasing it over her 'captives' shoulders, chests and faces. "I think it's time you profess your undying love for our singing voices!"

Both men started mumbling, exaggeratedly, into the gags. Jackal, aka Aaron, was still charmed by them so hereally loved their voices, and Horus knew if he didn't play along they were likely to throw him off the cliff.

"Mmm, I think they are getting about ready to use," Mel said. She was sitting up on the edge of the table, using her feet to tease to stroke both men's cocks at once. Both women had stripped naked once the men were tied up, and while I couldn't see it directly, I was pretty sure she was playing with herself with one hand for their viewing pleasure.

"Excellent, but which one should I take?" Veronica mused. "This one?" she ran the feather along Jack, her husband's, shoulders. "Or this one?" The feather swapped to Aaron, Veronica's husband.

"Who saysyou get to pick," Mel complained, still in that 'Siren' voice. "It wasmy song that got them up here."

"No, it was obviouslyme," Veronica argued. Then she leaned in, her breasts pressed to the shoulders of both men as they sat side by side. "Which one of us are you most enamoured with, little mortals?"

Both men started babbling again, playing along with the scene.

Rachel came. I hadn't even noticed that I'd been picking up speed as I'd been fucking her and I slowed down as her body wriggled and tensed as her orgasm passed through her and she moaned wordlessly around Jack's cock.

"You vant to make zis little cocksleeve squirt, mine bovine?" Jack asked me, picking up on the ridiculous nickname I'd used.

"Oh, yeah," I said. "You hear zat, cocksleeve? Ve are going to try and make you squirt. If you do, maybe ve let you go. If not, ve vill have to keep trying, over and over, day after day."

"It's a matter of minotaur pride, after all," Jack agreed.

We both pulled out of her, first Jack and then me, and we picked Rachel up as she chuckled and rolled her eyes at our silliness. We carried her out of the game room and into the living room - after years of fucking, both Jack and I knew exactly what would get Rachel to squirt. She needed the right angle of fucking against her g-spot and a dick in her mouth. She'd always said two dicks was the perfect number for a really good cum, and I believed that was true for her. We set her down on the arm of the couch, and I eased her shoulders down so she was lying back with her shoulders on the seat cushion. This raised her ass and pussy up to just the right height for fucking - a conscious decision when I'd bought the couch - and I gestured for Jack to go ahead.

"Ah, yes," he said in the 'minotaur' accent. "Yes, yes, yes. So much fun you are, little cocksleeve. Ve are very lucky I snatched you out of ze air!" He thrust into her and Rachel let out a long moan, shifting slightly and spreading her legs a little wider.

"You hit me with a rock, you big hairy bastard," Rachel said in Danitha's voice.

"Yes, vell, tomato, potato," Jack shrugged, butchering the saying and making both Rachel and I laugh.

I got up on my knees on the couch and tapped my cock against Rachel's forehead, leaving a little smear of precum. "Be nice, and perhaps ve vill let you live, cocksleeve," I said. Then I shuffled forward more and she tilted her chin up and started sucking on my balls while both hands came up to stroke my shaft.

"Such anasty little cocksleeve," Jack commented.

"Who knew dwarves ver so much fun, yeah?"

"So true," he replied. "Usually ve just cook zem up and eat zem. And zey are always so tough!"

"You dowhat?" Rachel asked from under me.

"Shush, cocksleeve," I said, shuffling back a little and tilting my cock down to slip into her mouth. "You are ruining ze moment."

It didn't take long for Jack to hammer into her, and we could both hear the squelchy sound that was the clear sign Rachel was about to explode. Over in the Game Room, I heard Mel let out the distinctive moan and laugh she always made when she sat down fully on a cock, and Veronica quickly let out her own groan of satisfaction as well - they'd finally actually gotten started.

Jack ripped his cock out of Rachel's pussy as she howled around my cock in her mouth, her knees squeezing back as her pelvis flexed and she shot a fountain arc of squirt almost vertical into the air before it spattered against the couch, Jack and the hardwood floor. That was why I only had leather couches and minimised the number of rugs.

"Your turn, mine bovine," Jack said with a grin.

"Yeah, good start," I agreed, pulling my cock from Rachel's mouth and giving her a chance to catch her breath. I circled around to her pussy and Jack knelt next to her head. She tilted her face to the side and got her lips around his cock, slurping on it quickly. Her pussy was already a nice, well-fucked pink and I slid two fingers into her, getting them covered in her juices before pulling them out and sucking on them. "Mmm," I groaned. "She tastes good down here. Perhaps ve should use her for seasonings!"

"Good idea," Jack laughed. "Ve could marinate our many meats in her juices!"

"I'malready marinating your meats in there," Rachel quipped back, pulling her mouth from Jack's cock to say it with a smirk.

"Vell, now you are," I said, feeding my cock into her again. I grabbed her thighs and held them as I started to long-stroke her. If I could get just the right angle, I was sure I could get her to squirt even higher than that first one.

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