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Lost in the Woods was the first post I ever made on Literotica. At the time I didn't realize you can't update or change posts. Most of my early stuff on here is pretty sloppily written and not really edited at all. I think this story had more potential than what it delivered. So, I went back and rewrote it. It's mostly the same story, with a lot of the same dialogue, but I added a lot. The original was 2900 words, and this one is about 8900. As of now the original has 36 favorites and a 4.41 rating after over two years, and I want to see how much better I can do with the same story if I put a little more effort into it. So, I hope you all enjoy this version more than the original. If you do, please like it and rate it, and feel free to comment.
"How the fuck did this even happen?" Jenny huffed in frustration. It had been almost five hours since they had seen anyone else, and she was thoroughly annoyed at being stuck out here with Daniel Jones of all people. There had been a time, long ago, that she had actually considered Daniel a friend. That was before she had become popular and attractive, and before he had become the dork that he was now. She hadn't even spoken to him in years, and now they were seemingly stranded in the woods together. "I bet you planned this. Didn't you?" She glowered over at him.
"What?" Daniel looked over at her in bemused frustration. He too had grown thoroughly annoyed throughout this long day in the woods, though for very different reasons. He had come along on this trip because he enjoyed the woods, and hiking, and unlike the boy scouts, the Outdoor Adventure Program allowed both boys and girls. That had been somewhat of a selling point for Daniel, though his day alone with Jenny had already made him reconsider. "Of course not," Daniel said incredulously, in his own defense. "How would I have even planned this in the first place?"
"I don't know how," Jenny snapped, scrunching up her gorgeous face in anger and disgust. "But I just know you must be loving this. Aren't you?"
"Being lost in the woods with someone who constantly belittles and berates me?" Daniel rolled his eyes sarcastically. "What's not to love?"
"Will you just show me how to get back to the camp," Jenny demanded indignantly. They should have found the rest of the group hours ago, and she was starting to get a little nervous, although she didn't intend to let Daniel know that. She had a reputation to uphold, even if just for a loser like him.
"If I knew, trust me, I would tell you," Daniel sighed. His own frustrations were reaching a boiling point, and he was trying hard not to yell at Jenny. He had liked her for as long as he could remember. Even when they were kids he had thought she was the prettiest girl he knew. Despite the changes in her personality over the years, as well as her looks, that feeling never really went away. First she had stopped hanging out with him, and eventually she even stopped talking to him altogether. No matter how mean or rude or entitled she seemed to get over the years, Daniel still couldn't help but think she was the prettiest girl he knew. Only now that they were nineteen, it wasn't just her face anymore. Her body had developed in ways that he could not have imagined. And he had done quite a lot of imagining when it came to Jenny.
"Alex had all the maps," Daniel said, inwardly kicking himself for not preparing for such a situation. He prided himself on being a competent and ready outdoorsman, and here he was, stuck in the middle of the woods with no idea where he was going or how to get back to the group. He had a general idea of which direction to go in, but the trails turned and weaved and intersected so much that he knew they could just as easily be walking further away from the group than towards them. "I don't know how to get back," he admitted, feeling the shame of it as he said it aloud.
"So, what are we going to do?" Jenny asked, her fear breaking through her wall for the first time. "It'll be dark in a few hours. We can't be out here by ourselves!"
"We may not have a choice," Daniel said, trying to clear his thoughts and find the solution. He felt confident that he could keep them both alive, if nothing else. "If we still haven't found anyone by the time its getting dark, we'll have to find some shelter for the night."
"Shelter!" Jenny squeaked in a high-pitched voice. "What kind of shelter?"
"Whatever kind we can get," Daniel said, not wanting to purposefully scare her, but also knowing that they were likely going to be spending the night out here alone. "If we go in that direction," Daniel pointed through the trees to the east. "There's a mountain, and cliffs. Maybe we could find a cave or something." Daniel knew that there were plenty of other concerns that would come with that, like the possibility of bears, but he kept that to himself.
"What the hell are we supposed to do in a cave?" Jenny nearly shouted. "We need to find the others!"
"Hopefully we will," Daniel sighed, trying to remain calm. "But if we don't, we'll need to find somewhere to sleep for the night."
"Sleep?" Daniel saw the appalled look on Jenny's face, and frowned. "You mean together?"
"Not together," Daniel said, trying to keep his emotions at bay. He didn't like the thought of spending the whole night with her anymore than she did, although he had to admit that there was a certain appealing aspect to the idea. "But certainly in the same place," he added, trying not to make it sound like he was propositioning her or something.
"Ugh," Jenny huffed dramatically, stomping one of her sneakers in the dirt. "I can't believe this! I mean I really cannot believe this! How in the world did we even get separated in the first place?"
"Well," Daniel sighed, feeling his frustrations wanting to boil over. "I'm guessing they lost us when you made us take that long break so you could fix your makeup."
"Are you saying this is my fault?" Jenny stopped walking. Daniel looked over at her, and felt a slight shiver as her eyes narrowed and glared daggers at him. They were still the most beautiful eyes he knew of, but they could be scary when she wanted them to be.
"Well, I certainly didn't make us take any unnecessary breaks," Daniel said, turning away from the scowl on her face. He had thought it was stupid when she made them stop, and he only stayed behind with her to seem gallant or something. Now he wished he had just stayed with the group and let her get lost on her own. But he knew it was probably for the best that she was with him. Even if he might be the last person in the world she would want to be stranded with, he was the best suited for it.
"It was not unnecessary," Jenny insisted, though without much real conviction.
"We're in the middle of the woods, a hundred miles away from civilization!" Daniel said, barely able to keep from shouting at her. "Why in the world would you need makeup? If it's for Greg, just forget it. You don't need it. He literally just likes you because of your body."
"Fuck you, Daniel!" Jenny spat angrily. "Just because no one likes you doesn't give you the right to speak to me like that! Besides, I know Greg really likes me. He's told me."
"Really?" Daniel said with a heavy eye roll. "Well do you want to know what he told all the guys last night? He had plenty to say about you, but none of it involved your personality."
"Just shut up!" Jenny shouted angrily. "You're such a little liar! You're just jealous because you couldn't get a girlfriend if your life depended on it."
"Honest to God," Daniel said with a straight face. "He was bragging all night about how he was going to 'tear that sweet ass up.' His words."
Jenny fell silent at that, and Daniel couldn't help but feel a little guilty. He hadn't lied; Greg really had been saying just that. But that didn't mean he had to tell Jenny. It was true that she had been a total bitch to him since the fourth grade, and she clearly thought she was better than him, but she was still a person with feelings. Daniel knew Jenny liked Greg. He guessed that her attraction to Greg was likely just as physical as Greg's was to her, but that didn't make it any less hurtful. Daniel knew perfectly well that Greg didn't give a shit about Jenny. He had made his intentions as clear as could be. He wanted to sleep with her and then drop her like a bad habit.
Daniel wondered why he even cared. They hadn't been friends in so long he could barely remember it ever being real. Their paths over the last ten years had been polar opposites. Jenny had begun hanging out with the popular crowd, and then eventually leading it. She joined the cheer team, grew into one of the most amazing bodies Daneil had ever seen, and became the envy of everyone in school.
During that same time Daniel had lost one childhood friend after another as they didn't want to be seen with him at school. He had tried out for the baseball team freshman year, but after getting beaten up in the locker room he quit and joined the debate team instead. The only friends he had were in the same social standing as him, with no upward trajectory allowed. While Jenny's body had developed in the most obvious and noticeable ways imaginable, Daniel had grown tall but stayed skinny and gangly. His acne hadn't cleared up until he was practically done with high school. The one way in which his body had developed that he could be proud of, he couldn't show or tell anyone. It was his own secret that he desperately wanted to share, though was terrified of how to do it.
Jenny walked ahead of him, keeping a steady pace. Daniel found himself staring at her legs as she walked. They looked long and tan, and unbelievably smooth. The further up they went, the better they looked, until they reached arguably her best feature. Daniel tried not to stare too blatantly, but the way her perfectly round ass moved as she walked was too sexy not to stare at a bit. He knew that no matter how mean she had gotten to him over the years, he still had the crush on her he always had. And staring at her ass as they walked alone through the woods, Daniel knew that there was nothing she could do or say that would break the attraction he felt towards her.
As the sun reached the top of the mountains in the distance, Daniel resigned himself to what he knew the situation to be. They were too lost to expect to be found tonight. They must have taken a wrong turn after getting separated from the rest of the group, and now they were truly lost. He guessed they would likely be found tomorrow, but he knew he had to start preparing for a night in the woods. He just didn't like the thought of having to explain that to Jenny, who still seemed to think they would find the others at any moment.
As they came around a bend in the path, Daniel saw the river up ahead. On one hand the sight of the river was reassuring, as it gave him a much better idea of where they actually were, but on the other it let him know just how far out of the way they had gone. They weren't meant to reach the river again for another three days, and not at this part of the river at all. Again he cursed himself for allowing them to get so lost on his watch. He should have been able to keep them on course, but he supposed he must have gotten caught up in thoughts of Jenny, and her legs. In any case, finding the river let him know generally where they were, and also that they wouldn't find the others tonight.
"We should stop and wash up here," Daniel said, breaking the long tense silence that had followed his rude but truthful admission of Greg's vulgar talk of Jenny. "I don't want to sleep with all this bug spray and sunscreen all over me." He began walking towards the water, and pulled his shirt over his head.
"But... won't we get bitten by bugs all night if we wash it off?" Jenny asked hesitantly. She watched Daniel walk over to the river, and she couldn't help but notice how toned the muscles in his back looked. It came as a bit of a surprise, as she had thought Daniel was still the scrawny loser he had been the last time she had seen him without a shirt on, which she realized was years ago.
"Maybe," Daniel shrugged. "Mosquitoes don't bite me all that much."
"Well, they bite me like crazy," Jenny said. Daniel couldn't blame them.
"Honestly, bugs aren't my concern at the moment," Daniel said as he threw his shirt onto a tree branch next to the river. He made to unbutton his shorts, and then looked over at Jenny, acutely aware of her eyes on him. "I'm more worried about those clouds," he said, and pointed towards the darkening sky in the distance.
"What about them?" Jenny asked, and Daniel could hear the worry in her voice.
"I think it might rain," he said, not wanting to scare her, but also not wanting to lie. The clouds were already much darker than they had been an hour before.
"Oh my God," Jenny said, sounding overwhelmed. "It can't rain!"
"Sure it can," Daniel sighed. "But it may not," he added, more to comfort her than because he believed it. "Either way, I hate sleeping with bug spray on. I'm going to wash off, and then we'll go over to the mountainside and hope we can find somewhere to stay out of the rain if it does happen."
"Well, if it might rain, I'm staying dry," Jenny said, crossing her arms and standing on the path.
"Suit yourself," Daniel shrugged. He hesitated a moment longer, and then pulled his shorts down, not even daring to look in Jenny's direction. He quickly ran to the river, not wanting to stand in front of her in his boxers, and then slowly waded in, enjoying the cool water on his skin after a long hot day of hiking.
Jenny did watch him as he undressed. And she did check him out, just as he had been checking her out all day. First she noted that his chest and abs seemed to be just as toned as his back. Then she noticed his arms. They weren't huge like Greg's, but they were toned, and looked strong. She could tell Daniel had put in some work to get his body to look that way, and it made her wonder if maybe everyone had been too harsh on him. The last thing she noticed was when Daniel ran to the water. She glanced down at his boxers instinctively, and could see that there was definitely something sizeable in there, bouncing around as he ran.
"Are you really not coming in?" Daniel asked as he popped his head out of the water. The water looked so cool and refreshing, and Jenny did want to wash the bug spray off herself as well. She remembered reading once that leaving bug spray on for days could be bad for the skin, and she took her skincare about as seriously as she took anything.
"Fine," she said reluctantly. "But turn around. I'm not taking my clothes off in front of you."
Daniel chuckled and rolled his eyes as he turned around in the water. He could hear the sounds of Jenny undressing, and for a moment it felt like an invisible force was trying to turn his head to look at her.
"Ah! It's so cold!" Jenny exclaimed. Daniel turned around at her noise of alarm, and then his mouth fell open. Jenny only had her feet in the water, with the rest of her body on full display, only hidden by the small white panties and bra she wore. His eyes slowly climbed her long tanned legs, drinking in the sight of her. Her legs looked just as good from the front as they had from the back. His eyes lingered on her panties for just a moment, and then they went further up. Her stomach looked tight and firm, without being overly muscular. And then his eyes found the real prize.
Daniel couldn't stop himself from staring blatantly at Jenny's breasts. He realized just how much the shirts she wore did to cover up how much her chest had grown over the years. He knew they were big, as he stared at them rather often. But he hadn't realized just how big, or how perfectly round they actually were. They looked huge, and he had to take a gulp as he finally managed to pull his eyes back up to her face.
"Hey! No peeking," Jenny said as she saw him ogling her, but she didn't sound as mad as she might have hours before.
"Sorry," Daniel said sheepishly, and quickly turned back around. Now it was like a tractor hitch was attached to his neck, trying to turn it to look at Jenny's amazing body again.
After a torturously long minute, he heard her splash down into the water, and turned around again. Jenny's body was beneath the water now, but he could still stare at her beautiful face. Daniel wondered, and not for the first time, if she was the prettiest girl he had ever seen. He thought that she probably was.
Somehow her hair looked even better when it was wet. She had dipped beneath the water, and her long brown hair hung behind her head, leaving the exquisite bone structure of her face on full display.
Every bit of her face was how Daniel would have drawn up his dream girl. Her cheeks and jawline were unreal, utterly perfect. Her nose was slim and sexy, and turned up just the slightest bit. Her lips were big and full, and every time Daniel saw them he wondered what they might feel like. The most beautiful, and most perfect thing about Jenny, even more than her body, were her stunning blue eyes. Daniel stared at her eyes and seemed to get lost in them.
"Okay," Jenny said, snapping Daniel out of the trance he had fallen into while staring at her. "We should probably find some shelter before it starts getting dark. Right?"
"Right," Daniel nodded quickly, finally tearing his gaze away from her beautiful face.
"Okay, well, turn around again," she said with a playful, knowing smile. Daniel felt his neck burn, and turned around again. He could hear her get out of the water and walk over to where their clothes were. He waited a minute, giving her time to dress, and then turned around. To his surprise, Jenny had not yet finished dressing. Instead, she was bent all the way over, facing away from him as she stepped into her shorts.
Daniel stared open-mouthed at her amazing ass. He had been staring at her ass all day, all week even, but this was the first time he saw it with just her panties on. She was wearing a thin white G-string that disappeared up her crack, so Daniel could really see everything. Her ass was big and round, and literally formed a perfect heart as she bent down. Daniel couldn't quite understand how any girl could have an ass that much bigger than her legs without it looking fat at all.
He quickly turned around as she stood back up, not wanting to get caught. As he heard her zipping up her shorts, he realized he had a bit of problem on his hands, a big problem.
"Okay," Jenny called to him. "Let's go." Daniel felt panic wash over him. He knew he had to leave the water, but he also knew that there would be no way of hiding the boner he was now sporting after staring at her ass. He tried to will it away as he slowly swam over to the bank.
"Come on, let's go," Jenny said impatiently. "What's taking so long?"
"What, I have to turn around but you don't?" Daniel said, thinking on his feet. It was a stupid excuse, but he didn't know what else to say.
"Seriously?" Jenny laughed, rolling her eyes at him.
"I had to turn around when you got out," Daniel said, still trying and failing to make his dick get soft. "Now you turn around."
"Ugh, fine," Jenny huffed in amused exasperation. "Just be quick."
As soon as she turned around, Daniel hurried out of the water. He looked down at himself, and as expected saw the very clearly visible outline of his large semi erect penis clinging to his wet boxers. As Jenny stood with her back to him, she remembered what she had seen earlier, and wondered what he was now trying to hide. He had shown no resistance to taking off his clothes in front of her before. Which meant something must have changed.
She wondered if he had gotten a boner from staring at her. She knew he had been staring; he hadn't been all that subtle about it. It wasn't an uncommon experience for her. Most guys seemed to stare at her these days, and quite often she could see guys get an erection while they stared at her. Not just guys her own age either. College guys, married guys, old guys, she had caught them all ogling her.
It had disgusted her when she was younger, but as she got older, and it happened more and more often, with more and more guys, she got used to it. She had decided to take it as a compliment that guys of all ages couldn't even stop themselves from getting hard around her. She especially liked to make guys with big ones get hard for her, and she now had a feeling Daniel had a big one. She was more sexually experienced than most girls her age, and she had gotten to experience a few big cocks. She enjoyed having sex with them, but not as much as she enjoyed making them get hard. There was just something about making men, especially large men, get an erection when they weren't supposed to that turned Jenny on. It was like her own little kink that she never told anyone about, but thought about often. And now it seemed like maybe Danny was large, and was currently hard from staring at her. She decided it was her right to get a peek at what she might have caused.
"Ready?" Jenny asked, turning around to face him, knowing full well that he would not be ready yet. Daniel froze in the act of pulling his shorts up. He had gotten them halfway up, but still needed to get past his boxers. Jenny looked down, and then her face broke into a big, delighted grin as she saw the clear outline of a huge cock going down the leg of Danny's boxers. Jenny stared with wide eyed at the obscene way the boxers clung to the long, thick bulge. It was hard to tell for sure, but it looked bigger than any cock she had ever seen in her life.
"Holy shit," she said out loud before she could stop herself.
"Sorry," Daniel said, his face redder than ever. He pulled his shorts the rest of the way up as fast as he could, though he had to take a moment to angle his large bulge back into his shorts. Jenny watched in awed fascination as he pushed the huge tent down, and then into his shorts. Even once he had it inside, she could still clearly see the lewd bulge snaking down the left side of his shorts. Never in a million years would she have guessed that Daniel had something like that in his pants, and it brought a heat low in her belly that she hadn't expected. She still though of him as the dork she had for years, but now she had to question if maybe she had been too harsh on him. It made her feel more shallow and vain than she cared for, but she couldn't deny that seeing what Daniel had in his pants turned her on, even if she did wish it belonged to someone else.
"We should find some cover," Daniel said awkwardly as he straightened himself out, clearly trying to change the subject.
"What? Oh, right," Jenny said, finally looking up from the bulge in Daniel's shorts. "Um... which way?"
"Let's try that way," Daniel said, pointing toward the cliff. "There might be a cave somewhere if we're lucky."
Jenny nodded in agreement, still reeling from what she had seen, and they began walking again. Neither of them spoke as they walked through the fast-cooling woods. Daniel could tell that he was going to be proven right about the rain. The clouds above them were now dark enough that it was getting hard to see, and he expected the rain to begin falling at any moment. But that wasn't what he was thinking about. The problem of being stranded out in the woods overnight in the rain no longer seemed important at all. The only thing Daniel could think about was the look on Jenny's face when she had seen his boner. At first he had felt his stomach drop, and was prepared for the most mortifying embarrassment he had ever felt. But he hadn't expected that look on her face. It was hard to believe, but it had looked like she actually liked what she saw, maybe even a lot.
Jenny, for her part, was thinking much the same thing. She knew he liked her; she had known it for years. But he was a loser, and she was popular, so she ignored him. An hour ago, the thought of spending the night in a cave with Daniel had seemed repulsive, but now she was kind of looking forward to it. She still thought he was annoying, and nerdy, but she could no longer deny that he was physically attractive. The thought seemed rather absurd to her. If one of her friends had asked her what she thought of Danny Jones just yesterday, she would have given a tirade of insults, from his face to his body to his boring personality.
But the insults about his body simply wouldn't hold up after what she had seen. It wasn't just what he had in his pants either. His torso was far more toned and muscular than she ever would have guessed. She even found herself thinking that his face wasn't as bad as she had thought either. He didn't have the acne he used to, and the light stubble on his cheeks and chin was actually kind of sexy. He even had nice green eyes that she had noticed as he stared at her in the water. Even his personality didn't seem as unattractive as she had thought before. He could be funny when he wanted to, and the way he was handling this whole situation was kind of hot.
Jenny wondered how Greg would have handled being stranded alone out here with her. She knew he obviously would have wanted to hook up with her, but any guy would. She wanted to believe that Greg would be able to take the lead and know to find shelter, and think to wash up, but she doubted he would. Greg was good at playing football and being a jerk. He was hot in an obvious, conventional sort of way. Jenny had been planning on hooking up with him on this trip for the last two months, but now that seemed stupid. She hadn't wanted to believe what Daniel said that Greg said about her, but she knew it was true. Daniel wasn't a liar, and Greg was. A part of her was grateful she found out before doing it with him. She had slept with jerks before, but she tried to avoid it when she could. She didn't like the feeling of being another notch in a guy's belt. And she knew that with a guy like Daniel, she wouldn't be just another notch, she could be the notch.
The sun was long gone, the clouds were dark and angry, and they could barely see. Jenny stumbled down the path, trying to see her footing as she went. She looked up at one point, and realized Daniel wasn't next to her anymore. For a moment she felt a terrible panic rising in her throat. She looked around, fearing she might be out here all alone, and realizing just how much she had been relying on him, and then he called out from up ahead.
"Here!" Daniel shouted from close by. "There's a cave here!" Jenny ran towards the sound of his voice, and then found him in a little overhang of rocks jutting out from the mountain. It wasn't really a cave, but it was better than nothing.
"I think we can stay dry under here," Daniel said. A split second later they heard a crash of thunder from overhead, and a moment later the water began coming down in thick sheets. They sat down in the dirt, with their backs against the rocks. There was something peaceful about watching and listening to the rain. It might have been nice, if not for their current situation. Within twenty minutes of the rain starting, the temperature dropped drastically.
Neither of them was dressed properly for a night outdoors in the rain. They were both wearing shorts and t-shirts, and Jenny's shorts barely went halfway up her thigh. Jenny could feel her body beginning to shiver, and she brought her knees up to her chest and hugged them tight. The thought of spending an entire night out in this cold would have made her shiver if she hadn't already been.
Daniel could see her shivering and wanted to help. He was cold too, but he could see that Jenny was struggling with it. He wanted to offer to cuddle up with her and use each other's body heat for warmth, but didn't dare after getting a boner in front of her less than an hour ago.
"It's s-so cold," Jenny said twenty minutes later, her teeth clattering together. "We need a fire or something."
"I don't think I can start a fire now," Daniel said as he stared out at the falling rain. "Everything's wet."
"Well we have to do something!" Jenny said seriously. "I can't spend the whole night like this, Daniel. I'll get hypothermia or something."
Daniel didn't say anything at first. He knew she was right. The only fat the girl had on her was in her ass, and that wasn't going to keep her warm. And he knew he couldn't start a fire now, if he even could have without the rain. They had no supplies, the wrong clothing, and the rain didn't look like it would let up anytime soon. The only thing he could think of was using each other for warmth. He still didn't want to suggest it, but he didn't see any other way, and Jenny sounded more worried than he liked.
"Well... uh... I guess we could... uh... try to use each other's body warmth... to keep us warm," Daniel said awkwardly, knowing how it must sound, and hating it. He couldn't even look at her as he made the suggestion.
"What?" Jenny said, sounding genuinely confused. "How would we use each other's body warmth?"
"Well... uh... we would have to sort of... uh... cuddle up together," Daniel said awkwardly, his face turning beat red in the dark.
"Yeah, I just bet that's what you want," Jenny scoffed, trying to maintain her earlier attitude towards him. Despite the thoughts she had on the walk, she hadn't planned on cuddling up with him just yet. And she hadn't really had time to think about how or if she wanted to adjust her treatment towards him. But it seemed she didn't have time for the games she normally would have played. Things would have to move a whole lot faster than they would have at her pace. She held off for another ten minutes before she felt like she would freeze.
"Okay, fine," she sighed, holding her whole body tight against the cold. "I'm so cold, just do whatever you can."
"Uh, okay," Daniel said nervously. "You just lay down. I'll warm you up."
Jenny lay down in the dirt, still shivering harshly, and then she felt Daniel lay down behind her. Feeling more nervous than he had ever felt, Daniel wrapped his arm around her, and then wiggled his body up against hers. He began rubbing his hand up and down her arm, trying his best to make it feel clinical rather than intimate. Right away they could both feel the warmth each other could provide. Jenny felt immense relief as her shivering slowly subsided some. She began wiggling her own body backwards into him, and then they really started getting warmer. The wiggling was definitely making them warmer, but that wasn't the only thing it was doing.
Jenny could feel Daniel's cock growing against her backside. She wasn't really surprised, seeing as she was basically grinding her ass on him. She continued her wiggling, making herself warmer, and felt his cock slowly growing against her ass. At first it just felt like something stuck between them, but it kept getting harder, and bigger. After spooning for ten minutes, it was as hard as a rock between them, and felt absurdly large pressed against her.
Jenny knew that she would have to do something for him, or it would never go away. She thought about giving him a handjob, but her hands were nestled up under her chin, and she didn't want to bring them out into the cold. She considered giving him a blowjob. The thought wasn't as repulsing as it would have been earlier that day, but she would lose the warmth he was providing. The best idea, as much as she hadn't expected or planned on it, seemed to be to let Daniel fuck her. That way they could both stay warm, and she could relieve the tangible tension pressing into her backside. She had been thinking about what it would feel like inside her ever since she saw the outline in his wet boxers. She just hadn't planned on finding out this soon.
Without saying a word to Daniel, Jenny reached down and unbuttoned her shorts. She began slowly wriggling out of them, and felt Daniel's body jolt as he became aware.
"Wh-what are you doing?" Daniel said in shock.
"What do you think I'm doing?" Jenny said in exasperation, still shivering lightly.
"You... but..." he stammered.
"Just shut up and take it out," Jenny demanded, rubbing her now bare ass against his groin.
"Are... are you serious?" Daniel said in astonishment.
"Unless you can think of a better way to get rid of the freaking police baton poking me in the back," Jenny said.
"Right, sorry," Daniel mumbled. He scooted backwards for a moment as he reached down to undo his shorts, and they both felt each other's warmth go away.
"Hurry up!" Jenny hissed.
Daniel unbuttoned his shorts, reached in, and pulled his dick out. As soon as it was out, he felt Jenny push back into him. His cock slid between her ass cheeks, and it felt warm and amazing. He couldn't believe this was actually happening. Never in his wildest dreams could he have seen today ending like this. Jenny would have been just as shocked, even though she was the one driving things. She could feel his cock pulsing between her ass cheeks, and was amazed at how big it felt against her. She felt nervous about taking something that big inside her, but her body was quickly preparing itself for the inevitable. The warmth she had felt deep in her belly was now a fire, which was aiding her greatly against the cold. She could feel the muscles in Daniel's chest and arms as he squeezed her body tighter to his.
"Come on, stick it in already," Jenny said impatiently. Daniel reached a hand between them, and took hold of his cock. His fingers felt like ice as they wrapped around it. Daniel worked at angling his cock into her, and Jenny moved her body to help him. One moment his cock was feeling the incredible smoothness of her ass cheek, and then the next it found the most wonderful, warm wetness it had ever felt. He rubbed the head of his cock along her pussy twice, but she didn't seem to be interested in waiting. She moved her hips, he felt himself slide in, and then she pushed back against him, taking him deep.
For Daniel it was the most amazing feeling in the world. He forgot everything else in an instant. The rain, the dark, the potential dangers of the woods, all gone. Only the feeling of Jenny's perfect body and tight, warm pussy remained. He had never had sex before, and never would have dreamed that he ever would with someone like her. But now it was happening. He began gently thrusting his hips, moving his cock inside her. She was pushing back against him, and still wiggling her hips.
For Jenny it felt just as surprising. Unlike Daniel, she had had plenty of sex, but it had never felt quite like this. His cock felt almost uncomfortably deep inside her, and she could feel the way it was stretching her. She also thought it felt shockingly hard for how big it was. In her experience the really big ones didn't get as hard as he was now. Again she felt a strange sort of pride in being able to make a cock that big get that hard.
"Ohhh," Jenny moaned out as his cock pushed deeper into her. "Oh my God. That's really big." Daniel started moving his hips in a smoother rhythm, and a moment later Jenny's hips matched his. They seemed to find the proper rhythm together, and then it felt even better. Jenny was shocked to feel an orgasm already beginning to build up inside her.
It wasn't like any sex Jenny had ever had. Usually, guys would want her totally naked, and in positions that would show off her body the most. Most often they would want her on top, or from behind. They would also always insist on having the lights on. Sex seemed to be a very visual experience with most men she had been with. But this was totally different. She could barely see at all, and knew that Daniel couldn't either. He had his arms wrapped tight around her, hugging her close to his body. She could feel his whole torso pressed against her back. And where sex usually involved almost comical thrusting, this was far more intimate. He was buried so deep within her, and their movements were slow and sensual. It didn't feel like he was fucking her, or she was fucking him, it felt like they were doing it together. Their hips moved in unison, moving his cock inside her, and she felt herself getting closer. She had never actually had an orgasm during sex before, only from foreplay or masturbation, but Danny was bringing her there now.
"Ohh!" Jenny moaned loudly as she felt it building. "Oh fuck! That feels so good! Oh! Don't stop! Oh fuck I'm going to cum! Oh! Ahhh!" Jenny felt it hit like a tidal wave crashing over her. Her body began shivering even harder than before, only now from pleasure rather than cold.
Daniel could feel her body shivering against his, and he could feel her pussy clamping tighter on his cock. He reached under Jenny's shirt, and took one of her large soft breasts in his hand. She moaned even louder as he pinched one of her hard nipples, and ground her ass against him so hard he thought their hips might chafe. As he felt her orgasm happening, he knew he was going to cum too.
"Ugh, I'm gonna cum too," Daniel announced with urgency.
"Ahhh, cum inside me," Jenny moaned in ecstasy.
"Are you sure?" Daniel asked, not really sure he could even pull out if he wanted to. He had always been told to wear protection, but he wasn't now.
"I'm on the pill," Jenny panted as she came down from her amazing orgasm. "Shoot your load inside me, Danny." That did it for him.
"Oh fuck!" Daniel grunted as he bucked his hips against her plump ass. She was soaking wet, and he started actually fucking her instead of just grinding. As he pounded his cock into her he felt his orgasm rush on. Jenny was still reeling from her own orgasm, but Daniel's pounding was bringing her back up the hill.
Daniel let out a loud grunt, and felt his cum jet through his cock. He came harder than he ever had before, and he always came a lot. He had never cum inside anything before, let alone a woman, and he could feel each blast as it shot out of him and into her. He could feel that he was shooting a truly massive load, even for him, and was a little surprised at how long it went on.
Jenny heard Daniel grunt, and then felt the most massive load she had ever felt shoot into her. She had let guys cum inside her before, that's why she took the pill, but it had never felt like this. It felt like Daniel shot a rocket off inside her, and it wasn't stopping either. As she felt him shoot one massive blast after another, she felt herself orgasming again. It wasn't quite as hard as the first one, but with Daniel continuing to shoot off inside her, it felt truly amazing.
"Holy shit," Jenny panted when they were both done. "I didn't know any guy could cum that much."
"I mean, I usually cum a lot," Daniel panted back. "But never like that. That was... wow."
"Yeah, me too," Jenny agreed, nestling her head against his chest. They stayed like that for five minutes or so, and then Jenny noticed Daniel was beginning to grind his hips again, and his cock was getting hard as a rock again. "Um, Daniel... what are you doing?"
"I'm keeping you warm," Daniel whispered huskily into her ear as he pushed himself into her. She let out a soft moan and wiggled her hips with his. "Do you want to keep going?"
"I mean, yeah," Jenny said truthfully. "But, you just came a fucking river. Can you seriously go again already?"
"For you, I think I could stay hard all night," Daniel said, squeezing one of her breasts softly and kissing her neck. Jenny let out a long, soft moan and pushed back into him. She still felt sensitive and sore from cumming twice, but his cock felt so good inside her that she knew they had to continue. And the fact that he had cum that much inside her and could still keep it up played right into her kink of getting guys hard. She had only been with two guys who were able to keep it up after cumming, and neither of them were anywhere near as big as Daniel. The idea that a cock that big could get that hard, cum that much, and then stay hard, and all for her, turned Jenny on more than anything. As she felt his cock reaching its full potential once again, she knew she had to take things further. She scooted forward in the dirt, letting his cock finally slide out of her.
"What's wrong?" Daniel said instantly.
"Nothing," Jenny said as she sat up. She quickly wiggled her way out of her shorts, and tossed them aside in the dirt. She was naked from the waist down, and the cold air hit her skin, but she no longer felt cold. The warmth Daniel had provided inside and out was keeping, and she wanted to feel his cock better.
"Why did you stop?" Daniel asked, sounding concerned.
"Because I want to be on top this time," Jenny said, getting up on her knees and facing him.
"But... what about the cold?" Daniel asked with wide eyes. "Don't you...?"
"Shut up," Jenny cut him off. "Get on your back." He shut his mouth and did as he was told. Daniel lay back in the dirt, and then pulled his own shorts off and tossed them on top of Jenny's. Jenny took a moment to properly admire Daniel's huge cock. It looked almost as good as it felt. She bent her head slightly, taking in the slight downward curve, and the large winding vein going up the side. The head looked big and perfect, and she couldn't help but bend down and take it in her mouth. She couldn't fit much more than the head in her mouth, but she sucked gently on it for a moment, and was glad with the sounds Daniel made.
Daniel couldn't believe how good her mouth felt on his cock. He wished she could take more of it deeper, but just feeling her lips on it was incredible. He lay his head back in the dirt, listening to the pattering sounds of the rain, smelling the fresh scent of rain on dirt, and feeling the wonderful sucking sensations of Jenny's mouth on his cock. Jenny sucked on his cock for about a minute, and then sat back up and got on her knees above him. She swung a leg over, straddled him, and then moved down until her pussy was resting above his cock. She waited a moment, teasing him slightly, and then brought her hips down in a smooth easy motion.
They both moaned out together as Jenny pushed her hips down, taking him deep inside her. It already felt much deeper in this position, and she took a moment to try to adjust to his size. She began bucking her hips back and forth slowly, moving his cock inside her without really thrusting. Daniel placed his hands on her hips, and she gasped at how cold his fingers felt, though they quickly got warmer as he held onto her. Jenny began moving faster, raising her hips up and then dropping them back down on his cock. She could feel yet another orgasm building inside her. She placed her hands on his chest and leaned all her weight forward, allowing for a better thrust with her hips. She began bouncing her ass up and down in deep thrusts. She looked down at Daniel's face, and knew he was in heaven. The pure lust in his eyes made her feel wanted and desired in a way she hadn't felt in a long time, and she felt herself nearing the edge again.
"Oh fuck!" Jenny moaned out as she sped up her movements. "Oh, Danny! I'm gonna cum again! Oh! Oh! Ohhh!" Jenny felt another orgasm wash over her, and let her body shiver and shake until it was over. Then she fell forward and collapsed onto his chest. Daniel moved his hands down and grabbed onto her ass firmly. She felt his hands guiding her body on top of his, continuing her hips' motions even after she had cum.
"I'm close again too," Daniel said in a husky whisper. Jenny brought her face down, and kissed him hard on the lips. She kissed him more fervently than she would normally kiss anyone, and felt him return the kiss with equal vigor. She pressed her body down against his, and kissed him with as much passion as she could. Daniel was taken aback by the kiss at first, and then seemed to melt into it. He held her body tight, and thrust his hips up into hers, and felt himself cumming inside her again. It wasn't as much as the first time, but still a lot, and Jenny had another small orgasm as she felt it shooting inside her.
Once they were both done cumming, Jenny finally got off him. They both grabbed their shorts and pulled them back on. For a while neither of them said anything, though the silence didn't feel awkward. Once they were both dressed again, Jenny lay back down in the dirt, and Daniel snuggled up behind her again. She could still feel his large cock pressed up against her ass, but it wasn't so hard anymore, and she actually liked the feel of it. They lay like that together for a long time, listening to the rain, until they both drifted off to sleep.
Daniel awoke first, to the sound of shouting voices in the distance. He sat up abruptly, and then looked down at Jenny sleeping soundly beside him. Her face had a light smile as her chest rose and fell slowly with her breathing. For a moment Daniel got caught just staring at her, and then he heard a shout from much closer than the others.
"Jenny!" A voice called out from not too far away. Daniel quickly shook Jenny awake. She seemed totally disoriented for a moment as he shook her awake, and then she slowly became aware of her surroundings.
"Wake up!" Daniel said urgently as he shook her shoulder gently. "Jenny, wake up! They found us!"
"They... oh, thank God," Jenny said, slowly sitting up and looking around.
"Yeah," Daniel nodded, trying to process everything that had happened the night before. "We... um... how should we..."
"Jenny! Daniel!" A voice called out from just around the corner.
"Here!" Jenny called back. "We're over here!"
A moment later Jenny's best friend Veronica came running around the corner. A moment after that came Sarah, one of the councilors, and more of the campers. Greg came running around the corner, and glared as he saw Jenny sitting beside Daniel in the dirt.
"Oh, thank goodness," Sarah said as she rushed over to them. "Are you both ok? Do you need any medical attention?"
"No," Daniel shrugged. "I don't think so. I don't. Do you, Jenny?"
"No. I'm fine," Jenny said, trying not to sound as flustered as she felt. "We're both fine."
"Are you sure you're ok, babe?" Greg said, walking over to Jenny and helping her to her feet. Jenny couldn't help but feel repulsed at Greg calling her babe.
"I'm fine. Really," Jenny insisted, dusting herself off as she stood. "Daniel took good care of me. We found the shelter before the rain started."
"Good," Sarah breathed out a sigh of relief. "Good work, Daniel. We were really worried about you both. What happened?"
"We... uh... we just sort of got lost, I guess," Daniel said, remembering all that had happened. "Must have taken a wrong turn early on in the day. And then... well... I guess we just got good and lost. You found us though. So... all's well that ends well, right?"
"I guess as long as you're both alright," Sarah said, eyeing them both carefully. "You're both sure you're feeling ok? You're not sick from the cold or anything?"
"No," Daniel and Jenny said in unison. They looked at each other, laughed, and then looked back at Sarah. Everyone was now looking at them both with puzzled expressions. No one seemed to understand why Jenny was acting so casual about having had to spend an entire night out in the woods and rain with someone like Daniel. Greg especially seemed confused and perhaps even upset by her change in attitude.
"Well, let's get you both back to camp," Sarah said with some concern. "I still feel like we need to make sure you're both ok."
"We're fine, really," Daniel said with a little laugh. "But ok, we can go back. "Lead the way. And I'll try not to get lost this time."
"Me too," Jenny agreed. "Sorry if we worried you. I'm guessing it was scarier for you than it was for us. We actually had a nice time together."
"You did?" Veronica asked, looking skeptical.
"Yeah," Jenny nodded, unable to contain her glowing smile. "Sleeping in the rain is kind of nice when you're not getting wet from it."
"But... wasn't it, like, freezing?" Veronica asked.
"Yeah," Jenny nodded, looking over at Daniel with a small smile. "But we managed to stay warm."
"We should head back," Daniel said quickly. He could see the wheels in some people's heads beginning to turn, and he wanted to get moving before they could ask any more questions.
"Right, well, disaster averted then, gang," Sarah said with a shaky laugh. "Let's get moving." With that they all began walking back to the trail. Jenny walked with Veronica, and Daniel walked on his own, behind the rest of he group. When Jenny looked back at him and smiled, he knew other people saw it too, but he didn't care. It felt to Daniel like things might just be quite different moving forward, and he was ready to see where it was going to take him.
I hope you enjoyed this new version of the story. It is still meant to be a one off, although I do have other stories involving this Outdoor Adventure Program. My story The Shadow is meant to be in the same program, although that isn't specified. I could potentially do a similar rewrite for that story and others if people are interested. This is the first rewrite I'm posting, so I'll be curious to see the reaction. I've already rewritten The Elevator as well, and will post it once I feel like its good enough. If you're interested in giving me more direct feedback or asking questions, you can follow me. Until next time then.
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