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The Hypnotic hour
CHAPTER ONE: THE CLOCK BEHIND THE DESK
Madeline Duval was not a girl who wasted time.
She didn't 'move' through life. She slid. A midtown condo overlooking the water, Peloton bootcamp at 6 a. m., cold brew and protein powder at 6:45, flawless hair by 7:20. Her nails were shellac, her schedule down to five-minute increments. Her work heels cost more than her first car, and she walked like someone owed her everything and was late delivering.
She was a sales engineer for VelvraTech, which meant she could charm a boardroom and explain predictive behavioral targeting in plain English. She liked her title. It made men flinch and nod at the same time.
By 10:00 a. m., she had already closed three leads and sent her fourth into a flirty nosedive of plausible deniability. Madison from EnviroCorp wasn't gay--but she'd stopped pretending not to blush when Madeline complimented her lip color.
Madeline flirted like she negotiated: effortlessly, and with edge.
She also fucked.
Not all the time. She was selective. But she liked it when it was 'good', and she liked it 'better' when it was hers.
She didn't let men take the lead unless they knew how to keep it. Her vibrator drawer was better stocked than most sex shops. She had orgasms on command, but only when 'she' gave the order.
Even now, in the middle of her fourth cold call of the morning, she could still feel the soft buzz of last night between her thighs. She'd edged herself during a Zoom call. Kept the toy under her desk. Played with the remote with her foot.
She hadn't come.
Not yet.
She was saving that for something more... satisfying.
"Hey, Mads," came the voice behind her.
Jessica, the redhead from UX. Too bright this early. Always smirking like she knew a joke Madeline wasn't in on.
Madeline raised an eyebrow. "Yes?"
Jessica handed her a folded note. "From Him."
Madeline's chest twitched, just a flutter. She took the note with practiced fingers.
Black stationery. Gold lettering. No signature. But only one person in the building used actual paper.
"Come to my office. 10:45 sharp."
- D.
David Calder.
Her boss. Her enigma.
The only man she'd ever worked under who made her feel... 'less certain'.
And she 'hated' uncertainty.
***
His office was on the 42nd floor, corner suite, view of the bay and half the city. No assistants. No noise. Just frosted glass and the hum of cold air and him always immaculate, always impossible to read.
She adjusted her pencil skirt. Tapped her heels once before the door.
No knock. That was the rule.
She stepped in.
He was at his desk. Tailored slate-gray suit, sleeves rolled just enough to show ink on one wrist--an old, angular tattoo she hadn't managed to identify.
He looked up.
Madeline held his gaze like a dare. "You rang."
"Come in," he said, tone neutral, but there was always something 'smirking' in the edges of his voice.
She crossed the room, smooth, unbothered, but the air was 'thick'. Not hot. Just... off. Like pressure before a thunderstorm.
She sat.
His eyes trailed her legs. Not long. Just once. Then back to her face.
"Do you know why you're here?"
"I assume it's not about the Hanley deal," she said, crossing one leg over the other, slow. "Unless you've developed a new kink for quarterly projections."
A ghost of a smile at the corner of his mouth.
"You're good, Madeline. One of the best."
"I know."
"But something's off."
She stiffened slightly. "Off how?"
"You're too controlled."
She laughed once, short and sharp. "That's not a flaw."
"No. It's a weapon. But weapons that never misfire get boring."
Her brow ticked.
"This isn't a performance review," he said, leaning back. "It's a... pivot point."
"What does that mean?"
He didn't answer.
Instead, he nodded at the wall behind his desk.
And that's when she noticed the 'clock'.
Big. Round. Antique brass, but gleaming. Mounted in a frame that looked too old for the room. The face wasn't standard. No numbers. Just odd, geometric marks. The hands were slender. They didn't tick.
They 'slid'. Inward. Then outward. Spiraled like snakes.
She blinked.
"New decor?" she said, voice too casual.
"Old," he corrected. "Much older than you think."
She looked again.
The hands were moving.
But not like any clock she'd seen.
Slow. Smooth. Hypnotic.
"It's from Prague," he said. "Sixteenth century. Used by a certain guild to... calibrate their apprentices."
She raised an eyebrow. "You mean brainwash?"
He shrugged. "Teach."
She tore her eyes from it. Realized her heartbeat was a little too loud.
"So this is a cult recruitment?"
"No. This is me offering you a choice."
He stood.
Walked around the desk.
Stopped close--too close.
She didn't back away.
He touched the side of her chair. Leaned in just enough that she could smell him: cedar, spice, something deeper.
"You're brilliant," he said. "But locked. Efficient. But numb."
"Excuse me.."
"You come. I know you do. But you never 'surrender'."
Her breath caught.
He reached into his pocket.
Pulled out a remote. Turned toward the clock.
Pressed something.
The spiral 'accelerated'.
And something 'shifted' in her.
Like the room had exhaled through her skin.
She blinked.
"What... what is that...."
"Nothing that'll hurt you."
He turned to her.
"Unless you're afraid of being 'wanted' differently."
She tried to laugh again. Her voice caught.
"I'm not afraid."
He tilted his head.
"Then look at the clock."
She did.
And this time, she couldn't look away.
The spiral was a trick.
That's what Madeline told herself the moment she noticed her legs had uncrossed without her permission. That her palms had slid from her lap to the edge of the seat, gripping the leather. That the air in the office had changed, from filtered corporate chill to something thick and heated, like a mouth breathing on her neck.
She was still staring at the clock.
God, it was 'just a clock'. Brass. Pretty. Old. The kind of object that tried to impress with mystery, like an expensive lighter or a chess set in a lawyer's den.
The way the hands glided, though, spiraling in and out, always drawing your eye to the center wasn't natural.
And Calderon 'knew' it.
"You're focusing too hard," he said softly, watching her from beside the desk. "Try blinking less."
Her mouth opened. "I'm not doing this."
"And yet you haven't looked away."
"I'm evaluating."
"Mm," he murmured. "Yes. Let me know what you find."
The spiral turned.
The silence throbbed.
Madeline swallowed. Her thighs pressed closer together. Her breath shortened just enough for her to notice it, but not enough to panic.
"I should go," she said.
He didn't block her path.
"Of course."
She didn't move.
Her knees weren't listening.
"You think this is cute," she muttered.
"No," Calderon replied. "I think it's necessary."
He walked behind her chair. Not touching, never touching--but she felt the heat of him as if his hand were already sliding up her inner thigh. Her pulse ticked faster. Her nipples had hardened beneath her blouse, a subtle prick of sensation that she told herself was just the air conditioning.
"You know what obedience is?" he asked.
"I'm not interested in being your fucking 'sub', David."
He chuckled, low. "I'm not offering you a leash."
"Then what?"
"A reset."
His hand finally touched her. Light, just at the base of her neck--two fingers, tracing the line between spine and collar.
"You're high-functioning. Always in control. Hyper-sexual, but bored. Intelligent, but exhausted. You've trained yourself so well to get what you want that you don't remember 'wanting' anymore."
She shivered. Her lips parted. Her pupils dilated, and she knew it. She was 'watching' herself fall apart in real-time.
"You're just saying words," she whispered.
"No," he said, stepping around, lowering himself to her level, eyes sharp and hungry. "I'm opening a door."
He leaned in. His lips didn't touch hers. His breath did.
"I'm going to say a phrase. And you're going to blink."
"I'm not...!"
"Time is money."
Her breath caught.
And she blinked.
The spiral surged forward. Just a fraction. Enough to make her stomach drop like an elevator skipping a floor.
"Shit," she breathed.
"There it is," he said gently. "The resistance. It's beautiful."
Her throat tightened. Her thighs pressed together again, harder. 'She was wet. Fuck.... already.' Not fully, not embarrassingly but she could 'feel' it. The same way she could feel her clit reacting to the sound of his voice.
He was still crouched in front of her. Still watching.
"You're still fighting," he said. "And that's good. You should."
"I'm not..."
"Don't lie."
Madeline looked at him. His face so calm, so fucking still. He wasn't turned on. He was 'measuring' her.
Like a lab rat with lip gloss.
"I'm leaving," she said, rising.
But her legs didn't fully obey.
She stood slowly. Unsteady.
The spiral was behind him now, still spinning. Still centered behind his dark hair and darker eyes.
"You're not hypnotizing me," she said.
"You're hypnotizing yourself," he corrected.
"I don't believe in that bullshit."
"Then why are you soaked?"
She flushed. Rage and humiliation twisted in her belly but 'so did heat'. Her nipples throbbed. Her breath refused to normalize.
"You're playing a game."
"No," he said. "I'm 'winning' one."
He stepped back toward his desk. Pressed a button.
The lights dimmed.
Only the spiral glowed now.
She should've run.
She didn't.
"Sit," he said.
"I'm not.."
"Time is money."
She sat.
Hard.
The spiral flared. Her pulse slammed behind her ribs.
"Good girl," he said.
Her pussy clenched.
The room felt smaller.
Hotter.
'He just said it to fuck with me,' she thought. 'That phrase isn't magic. I'm reacting because I want to...'
"Take off your jacket."
She hesitated.
Then slipped it down her arms.
"Unbutton your blouse. Just the top two."
She didn't.
She watched him.
Watched the clock.
Watched herself obey.
***
She was halfway undressed and half-delirious when her breath finally cracked.
"What the 'fuck' are you doing to me?"
"Exactly what you need."
"You don't know what I need."
"I know what you 'want'."
He stepped forward again. Closer.
"You don't want to be humiliated. You want to be 'outmaneuvered'. You don't want to be degraded. You want to be 'overridden'. You want to fall and blame someone else, so you can feel it, finally, without guilt."
"Stop..."
"Look at you," he said, touching her jaw. "Panting. Wet. Trying to stay upright while your brain is already kneeling."
"I'm not..."
"Time is money."
She gasped.
He touched her through her skirt. Just once.
Soaked.
"Ohhh..."
Madeline whimpereddd..'actually whimpered'. Slapped his hand away.
But didn't stand.
"You're... fuck, you're manipulating me..."
"I'm calibrating you."
"I didn't 'ask' for this."
"No," he agreed. "But your body did."
He leaned in.
"Tell me to stop."
She opened her mouth.
Nothing came out.
He brushed a finger across her lower lip.
"You're not helpless," he said. "You're in control. You can get up. Walk away. Report me."
She stared at the clock.
Then at him.
Her voice finally came. Hoarse. Low.
"... what happens if I stay?"
He smiled.
"I teach you to let go."
***
Madeline tried to stand.
Not because she was done. Not because she was okay. But because some primal shard of herself refused to be seen trembling in a man's office chair, blouse undone, body flushed, cunt soaked from two words and a spiral.
She made it halfway up before Calderon reached her.
His hand didn't push her. He didn't have to.
He touched her wrist softly and her knees buckled right back into the seat like they were wired to him.
"No," she said, a hiss between her teeth.
"Yes," he replied, voice quiet but so firm it carved itself into her spine. "You're not leaving until you understand what this is."
Madeline breathed through her teeth, jaw tight. She hated how her hands felt--restless, needy. She wanted to claw at his face and her own skin all at once. Her thighs were trembling. Her panties soaked.
She wanted to say it was all in her head.
He leaned against the desk. Relaxed. Smug.
The clock behind him kept spiraling.
"You think you're special?" she spat.
He tilted his head, watching her.
"You think I haven't had men try this shit before?" she snapped. "Controlling me? Training me? Playing dom with a voice and a stare?"
"No," Calderon said, calmly. "I think you've had 'boys' try. I think you've made them kneel without even unbuttoning your blouse. I think you've smiled in their faces while they begged to make you come."
She flinched.
He smiled, slower now.
"And I think that's exactly why your body is betraying you. Because this isn't some office power trip, Madeline. It's something you've been aching for longer than you'll ever admit."
She shifted in the chair--slow, as if trying not to move. Her thighs pressed together again, slick.
He watched her.
She glared. "You're insane."
"You're horny."
"Because you 'fucked' with my head"
"No," he interrupted, stepping closer. "Because your head's been wired like this since college, and you've been trying to masturbate it away in secret ever since."
Her mouth opened.
No sound came.
Calderon crouched in front of her chair again. Elbows on his knees. Eyes on hers. "Let me guess," he murmured. "You start with control. Every time. Slow strokes. Two fingers. Same rhythm. You tease yourself. Then edge. Then curse. Then grab the backup toy. Then come in frustration, not release."
Madeline was frozen.
"You play a fantasy in your head. Some version of this. A man who doesn't ask. Who knows. Not because he wants to fuck you.."
His hand rose, touched her jaw.
"but because he wants to 'own' you."
Her breathing broke. She didn't move. Couldn't.
"I've been watching you," he said, quieter now. "For months."
Madeline blinked.
Calderon continued. "Every sales pitch. Every flirt you weaponized. Every time you bent at the copy machine like you weren't performing. I saw it all."
She tried to shake her head.
He didn't let her.
"You knew what you were doing. But you didn't know why. Because you don't want to be admired. You want to be 'used'. You want to be 'rewritten'. And you know the only man who's ever had the spine to do it"
His hand slid down her throat. Not choking. Just pressure. Possession.
"... is me."
She trembled.
"I'm not your 'toy'," she whispered.
"Not yet."
His hand moved lower. Between her thighs. Paused just above her skirt.
"Want to prove me wrong?" he said.
She stared at him, panting.
"Then don't come."
She swallowed.
"I'm going to touch you," he said, voice so soft it was maddening. "Just once. Not even on your clit. Just against the wet spot I know is already there."
Her legs trembled.
"You'll feel it. Your body will surge. Your head will scream no. And your cunt..."
He smiled.
".... will beg."
She shook her head. "I won't."
He stepped back.
"Stand up."
She did.
"Skirt up."
She hesitated.
"Skirt. Up."
She obeyed.
"Panties to your knees."
Her breath was a moan now, silent but ragged.
She slid them down. Slowly. The cotton was soaked.
"Now sit again."
She did.
He didn't look away from her face.
One finger reached forward.
Brushed the inside of her thigh.
Just once.
She 'shook'.
Her whole body bucked.
"Ahh....." She bit her lip hard. Dug her nails into the armrest. Her clit throbbed like it had been slapped.
He didn't smile.
"You feel it?"
"Y-yes."
"Don't come."
"I.... I'm not..."
"You will."
She clutched the arms of the chair like she was falling. Her legs twitched. Her pussy clenched 'nothing'.
"Don't."
He tapped the remote.
The spiral accelerated.
And that was too much.
Her back arched.
"Ahhh..... f-fuckkkkkkkk"
Her thighs trembled.
"Noooo.. no, no, no.....!"
Her orgasm ripped through her like lightning.
Silent. Savage. Shameful.
She collapsed into the seat, panting, sweat on her neck. Her panties were twisted at her knees. Her mouth hung open.
Calderon stood over her, arms folded.
He didn't gloat.
He observed.
"I told you," he said.
She whimpered. Her voice raw.
"... fuck you."
"You already did."
He stepped behind the desk. Pressed a key. The spiral slowed.
Her breathing eased.
Her head slumped.
She didn't try to move.
"I don't want this," she said, hoarse.
"You don't want to want this," he corrected.
Her eyes flickered.
"You're still in control," he said. "You walked in here."
"You made me come."
"Your body did that. I just gave it permission."
She didn't reply.
He walked over. Crouched again.
"You're not mine yet."
She flinched.
"But you will be."
He brushed a hand through her hair.
"Because no one else will ever fuck your 'mind' the way I do."
She whimpered.
His voice dropped. Just above a whisper.
"And you like it."
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