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This is the introductory story to a much larger universe of stories.
Tucked off a forgotten highway in the deep, humid South, the Neon Palms exists in a kind of permanent twilight. The air hangs heavy, the bugs keep their own time, and the sun never quite rises. Travelers don't end up here by accident. They come carrying secrets, regrets, and desires they can't outrun.
This is the first story in the Neon Palms Motel series, where each room holds its own kind of confession. Some guests come looking for a second chance. Others find justice, redemption, or something stranger. And a few realize they crossed the line between life and death long before they ever checked in.
I hope you enjoy the noir-drenched universe of the Neon Palms Motel.
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The brass key felt warm in her palm, slick with the humidity that never broke. Room 7. The number was half-missing, worn away by years of Southern heat and secrets, but she could make out the shadow where it used to be.
Ava Wilde had been driving for hours through the Spanish moss and magnolia darkness, following signs that pointed toward towns with names she couldn't quite read in the heat shimmer. She'd stopped looking for familiar landmarks after the third wrong turn. Now she was here, wherever here was, standing in the parking lot of the Neon Palms Motel while palmetto bugs clicked across the cracked asphalt like nature's dice.
The red neon sign buzzed overhead, casting everything in shades of sin. VACANCY, it promised, though she hadn't seen another car on the highway for miles. Just her Mustang convertible, cherry red and paid for with money that wasn't entirely hers, sitting alone under the bleeding light.
The suitcase in her trunk held two hundred thousand in cash, pulled from Richard's safe while he was at his monthly "business dinner." The same safe where she'd found the photographs. Children's faces. Bank records. Payments to people who made problems disappear. Twenty-three years of marriage to a monster, and she'd been too comfortable, too afraid, too complicit in her silence to see what was happening in the basement of their charity foundation.
"First time?"
Ava turned. The night clerk stood in the doorway of the lobby, a man with tired eyes and knowing hands. He looked like he'd been expecting her, though she was certain she'd never called ahead. Everything felt like swimming through silk in this heat.
"Is it that obvious?"
"Most folks find their way here when they need to." He stepped aside, holding the door open. "Coffee's fresh if you want some. Rosa makes it strong enough to wake the dead."
The lobby smelled like cigarettes and old leather and something sweet that reminded her of flowers left too long in cemetery heat. A woman with honey-thick Southern drawl emerged from what must have been the diner, wiping her hands on an apron that had seen better decades.
"Sugar, you look like you could use more than coffee," Rosa said, her voice carrying the weight of someone who'd heard every confession the South had to offer.
"Kitchen's open all night."
"Just the room," Ava said, though something about Rosa's knowing smile made her want to tell the truth about the suitcase full of cash, about the husband who'd never notice she was gone until he checked his safe, about the red dress folded carefully in tissue paper like evidence of a crime not yet committed.
The night clerk turned the registry toward her. The leather binding was warped with humidity, the pages soft as skin. She signed her name with a hand that didn't shake, though it should have. Behind her real signature, she could swear she saw other names bleeding through the damp paper, as if the book held more stories than any reasonable guest log should.
"Room 7," the clerk said, sliding the brass key across wood that was sticky with Southern heat. "End of the row. You'll find everything you need."
Ava took the key and walked back into the thick night air. The darkness felt different here, heavier somehow, like it had weight. Her heels clicked against concrete walkways still warm from the day's heat.
Room 7 smelled like secrets and cheap motel soap. The mirror was fogged with condensation that never quite evaporated, and the wallpaper was peeling at the edges like old skin. A rotary phone sat heavy and black on the nightstand, silent and waiting.
She drew the curtains against the red neon light and sat on the bed. The springs creaked a confession she wasn't ready to make. Tomorrow, she'd have to decide whether to keep running or go back to the life that felt like wearing someone else's clothes in weather that never cooled.
The red dress lay across the chair where she'd placed it, silk that had cost more than most people made in a month. She'd bought it for the charity gala, the one where she'd planned to stand up during Richard's speech and tell everyone exactly what their donations were funding. She'd practiced the words in the mirror, imagined the gasps, the chaos, the satisfaction of watching his world crumble.
But when she'd found the evidence, when the reality of what he was doing hit her like a physical blow, she'd panicked. Instead of executing her carefully planned exposure, she'd grabbed the cash and run into the night, leaving behind her chance to be the hero and choosing instead to be another casualty of his crimes.
A soft knock interrupted her self-recrimination. Three taps, polite and patient.
"Yes?"
"Sorry to bother you." The voice was male, rough around the edges like whiskey over gravel. "I'm in Room 8. Tommy. I think your phone might be ringing."
Ava looked at the rotary phone. Silent and still. "I don't hear anything."
"Maybe it's mine then. These walls are so thin it's ridiculous." A pause. "You okay in there? You sound like someone who's carrying too much weight for one person."
Something about his voice made her want to open the door. Maybe it was the humidity making her reckless, or maybe it was the way he'd said it. Like he understood what it felt like to carry secrets that were too heavy for one soul.
She unlocked the door and found herself looking at a man who appeared to be in his early forties, with dark hair and eyes that had seen too much. He wore jeans and a white t-shirt that stuck to his chest in the heat, and his hands looked like they'd done honest work before whatever brought him here.
"Tommy Sullivan," he said, extending a hand that was warm and calloused. "I wasn't lying about the phone, by the way. Something's been ringing off and on for the past hour."
"Ava Wilde." She shook his hand, noting the way his fingers lingered for just a moment. "And I believe you. This place feels like the kind of spot where phones ring for people who aren't supposed to be here."
Tommy's smile was crooked, like it had been broken once and healed imperfectly. "Running from something or toward something?"
"Both, I think." The admission surprised her. She'd been planning to lie, to deflect, to maintain the careful distance she'd perfected over twenty-three years of marriage to a man who collected secrets like some people collected stamps. "What about you?"
"Depends on the day. Tonight, I'm running from the realization that I've been a coward for longer than I care to admit." Tommy leaned against the doorframe, and Ava caught his scent. Something clean and masculine that reminded her of rain on hot pavement. "Want to grab a drink? The lounge is supposed to be open all night, and I have a feeling we're both going to be awake for a while."
The smart thing would be to say no, to close the door and lock it and pretend she was just another tourist who'd gotten lost on back roads that led nowhere. But something about Tommy made her want to be reckless, to be the woman she'd been before twenty-three years of silence had taught her that invisible was safer than authentic.
"Give me five minutes," she said.
Ava changed into the red dress, silk that clung to her curves like liquid fire. In the fogged mirror, she looked like a woman with secrets worth killing for, dangerous and beautiful and alive in ways she'd forgotten she could be. When she opened the door, Tommy's eyes widened with appreciation that felt like recognition rather than simple desire.
"Jesus," he said, voice rough with something that might have been prayer or might have been damnation. "You look like trouble."
"The best kind," Ava replied, surprised by her own boldness.
The lounge was decorated with red vinyl booths and Christmas lights that had been left up so long they'd become permanent fixtures. A jukebox in the corner played something that bled Elvis into Nine Inch Nails, creating a soundtrack that shouldn't have worked but somehow created the perfect atmosphere for confession.
They chose a booth in the back, where shadows gathered like conspirators and the air conditioning barely moved the thick air. Tommy ordered bourbon, neat. Ava asked for the same, though she usually drank wine from very expensive vineyards.
"So," Tommy said, raising his glass in a toast that felt like ritual. "To running toward something better than what we're leaving behind."
They drank, and the bourbon burned like absolution. Outside the windows, heat lightning flickered without thunder, illuminating the Spanish moss that hung like forgotten dreams.
"Tell me about the coward thing," Ava said, settling back against vinyl that stuck to her skin in the humidity.
Tommy's eyes went distant, like he was looking at something only he could see. "I spent fifteen years in the Army. Special Forces. Did things that needed doing, saved people who couldn't save themselves. Came home thinking I was done with all that, that I could live a normal life."
"But?"
"But normal life includes watching the news. Reading papers. Seeing stories about kids who disappear into trafficking rings while everyone talks about how terrible it is but nobody does anything to stop it." Tommy's hands clenched around his glass. "I had the skills to help. Had contacts, resources, the kind of training that could actually make a difference. But I was too busy trying to forget what I was capable of to use it for something good."
Ava felt something cold settle in her stomach despite the oppressive heat.
"Trafficking."
"Three weeks ago, I finally stopped being a coward. Found a ring operating out of Atlanta. Did what needed to be done to shut it down." Tommy's voice was matter-of-fact, like he was discussing the weather instead of violence that had probably saved lives. "But the man running it had connections. Rich friends who don't like it when their supply chain gets disrupted."
"So you're running."
"So I'm deciding whether to keep running or go back and finish what I started."
Tommy looked at her directly, and Ava felt like he could see straight through to her soul. "What about you? What are you running from that's got you looking like vengeance in a red dress?"
The question hung between them like incense, heavy and ceremonial. Ava could lie, deflect, maintain the careful distance that had kept her safe for so long. Or she could tell the truth to a stranger who understood what it felt like to carry the weight of inaction.
"My husband," she said finally. "Richard Wilde. He runs a charity foundation that's supposed to help missing children."
Tommy's expression didn't change, but something shifted in his eyes. Something dark and knowing. "Supposed to."
"The charity is a front. The money people donate, the government grants, the private donations from wealthy families who think they're saving children." Ava's voice caught, but she forced herself to continue. "He uses it all to fund the very networks that traffic those kids in the first place. Creates the demand, then profits from providing the supply."
"How long have you known?"
"Three days. I found photographs in his safe, bank records, correspondence with people whose names I recognized from the news." Ava finished her bourbon and signaled for another. "Twenty-three years of marriage to a monster, and I never suspected. Or maybe I never wanted to see."
Tommy reached across the table and covered her hand with his. The contact sent electricity through her fingers, not the static charge of synthetic fabric in humidity, but something deeper. More intentional.
"What did you do when you found out?"
"I took his money. Two hundred thousand in cash from the safe. Then I packed a bag and ran." Ava looked down at their joined hands, noting how right it felt to be touched by someone who understood the weight of difficult choices. "I had a plan, before I lost my nerve. There's a charity gala next week, all the major donors will be there. I was going to stand up during his speech and tell everyone exactly what their money was buying."
"But?"
"But twenty-three years of being the perfect politician's wife doesn't prepare you for being a whistleblower. I got scared. Took the coward's way out and ran instead of fighting."
Tommy's thumb traced across her knuckles, and Ava felt something warm unfurl in her chest. Recognition, maybe, or kinship. "Sometimes running is the smart play. Gives you time to plan, to figure out the best way to fight when the odds are stacked against you."
"Is that what you're doing? Planning?"
"I was. But talking to you is making me think that maybe some fights are too important to plan carefully. Maybe some battles require you to be reckless, to trust that doing the right thing will somehow work out even when all the smart money says you're going to lose."
Their second round of bourbon arrived, and with it, a change in the atmosphere between them. The conversation had stripped away pretense, leaving them both exposed in the red neon light that filtered through the lounge windows. Ava could feel the heat radiating from Tommy's body across the small table, could see the way his eyes lingered on the curve of her throat, the hollow between her collarbones where her pulse hammered out a rhythm like desperate morse code.
"Dance with me," Tommy said suddenly, standing and extending his hand.
"There's no dance floor."
"There's space between the tables and a jukebox that's playing our song." Tommy's smile was crooked and perfect. "Besides, when's the last time you did something just because it felt right instead of because it was proper?"
Ava took his hand and let him lead her to the small space between the booth and the bar. The jukebox was playing something slow and sultry, all saxophone and promise, and Tommy pulled her close enough that she could feel the heat radiating from his body, smell the bourbon on his breath mixed with something that was purely him.
They moved together in the humid air, Tommy's hands on her waist while hers found the back of his neck. The red dress clung to her body like liquid sin, and she could feel Tommy's eyes on her like a physical touch, appreciating every curve, every line, every inch of skin revealed by silk that had been designed to seduce.
"You're beautiful," Tommy whispered against her ear, his breath warm against skin that was already fever-hot from the oppressive atmosphere. "But more than that, you're brave. Braver than you think."
"I'm a coward who ran instead of fighting."
"You're a woman who took two hundred thousand dollars from a dangerous man and drove through the night to a place that... Well, that exists in some sort of limbo."
Tommy's hands moved lower, fingers tracing the curve of her hip through silk that felt like it was painted on. "That's not cowardice. That's strategy."
Their dancing had become something else, something more intimate than simple movement to music. Tommy's body pressed against hers with increasing urgency, and Ava could feel the effect she was having on him, the way his breathing changed when she let her fingers trace the line of his throat, the soft sound he made when she bit her lower lip and looked up at him through lashes heavy with humidity and desire.
"Come back to my room," she said, the words coming out breathier than she'd intended.
Tommy's response was to kiss her, hard and desperate, like she was absolution and damnation wrapped in red silk. His mouth tasted like bourbon and promises that might be lies, and when he pulled away, his eyes held depths that reminded her of antique wells, dark and promising secrets if you were brave enough to look.
They stumbled back to Room 7, Tommy's hands never leaving her body, fingers tracing patterns on her skin that felt like he was memorizing her geography for future reference. Ava fumbled with the brass key, her hands shaking with more than just the oppressive heat, while Tommy kissed her neck, her shoulder, the sensitive spot where her pulse hammered against fragile skin.
The door closed behind them with a soft click that sounded like a decision being made. Tommy pressed her against the wall, his body covering hers, while his mouth found that spot just below her ear that made thinking difficult. Ava's hands found his t-shirt, pulling it over his head to reveal a chest marked with old scars that told stories of violence and survival.
"Tell me what you want," Tommy whispered as his hands found the zipper of her dress, fingers working the silk with practiced ease.
"I want to feel like someone other than Richard Wilde's wife," Ava gasped as the red dress pooled around her feet like spilled wine. "I want to remember what it feels like to be touched by someone who sees me instead of just my usefulness."
Tommy's hand cupped her chin with reverent attention, thumb tracing the line of her cheekbones like he was memorizing her features. "I see you, Ava. I see someone who's spent twenty-three years being invisible because it was safer than being real. I see someone who's tired of hiding her fire because other people might get burned."
When he kissed her again, it was with the kind of hunger that came from recognizing your perfect match in the most unlikely place. Ava wrapped her arms around his neck, feeling the solid weight of his body against hers, the heat that radiated from his skin.
They moved to the bed together, and Tommy's hands found the clasp of her bra, working it free with fingers that trembled slightly in the humid air. The silk fell away, and his eyes darkened with appreciation as he traced the curve of her breasts with reverent attention. Ava's own hands moved to his belt, fumbling with the buckle until he helped her, stepping out of his jeans while she slipped out of the lace that was the last barrier between them.
Now they were both naked in the red neon light, Tommy's hands mapping her body with careful attention while Ava explored the geography of scars that marked his chest, his arms, his hands. Each touch felt like recognition, like coming home to a place she'd never been but had always been searching for.
"Are you sure?" Tommy asked as he settled between her legs, his body poised above hers like a question waiting for an answer.
"I'm sure," Ava replied, pulling him down for another kiss. "I'm sure about this, even if I'm not sure about anything else."
Tommy entered her slowly, carefully, like he was handling something precious that might break if not treated with proper reverence. The sensation was overwhelming, not just the physical joining but the way their coupling seemed to burn away years of pretense and fear, leaving only the essential truth of two lost souls finding solace in each other's arms.
"You're so beautiful," Tommy whispered against her ear, his voice rough with emotion as he began to move inside her with deliberate tenderness. His hands traced the curve of her waist, her hips, discovering her body like he was memorizing every detail. "So perfect. So alive."
Ava gasped at the fullness of him, the way he filled spaces in her soul she'd forgotten existed. For twenty-three years, intimacy had been a duty, something performed with mechanical precision while her mind wandered elsewhere. But this was different. This was connection, recognition, the overwhelming beauty of being truly seen and wanted for who she was rather than what she represented.
"I'd forgotten," she breathed, her hands wandering across the broad expanse of his back, feeling the play of muscle beneath scarred skin. "I'd forgotten what it felt like to be touched like this. Like I mattered."
Tommy's movements were slow, reverential, each thrust designed to bring pleasure rather than claim territory. His mouth found her throat, kissing and tasting the salt of her skin while his hands cupped her breasts with gentle reverence. When his thumb traced across her nipple, Ava arched beneath him with a soft cry that seemed to come from somewhere deep in her chest.
"You do matter," Tommy said, his lips moving against her collarbone as he spoke.
"You matter so much, Ava. You're not his possession, not his pretty accessory. You're fire and strength and courage wrapped in silk and skin."
Their rhythm built gradually, each movement deliberate and measured, Tommy's body moving over hers with the careful attention of someone who understood that healing required patience. Ava felt herself opening to him in ways that went beyond the physical, years of careful emotional armor melting away under his tender assault.
"Tell me what you need," Tommy said again, as they moved together in the humid air. "Tell me how to make you feel what you deserve to feel."
"Make me forget," Ava gasped, her legs wrapping around his waist tighter. "Make me forget his hands, his voice, the way he made me feel dirty just by being near him. Make me remember what it's like to be clean."
Tommy's response was to increase his pace slightly, his movements becoming more urgent while maintaining the tenderness that was washing away years of accumulated shame. His hands found her face, thumbs tracing her cheekbones while he looked into her eyes with an intensity that made her feel exposed and cherished simultaneously.
"You are clean," he said, punctuating each word with a thrust that sent electricity through her nerve endings. "You are beautiful and strong and brave, and none of his darkness can touch that. None of his poison can reach the fire inside you."
Ava felt tears leaking from the corners of her eyes, not from sadness but from the overwhelming relief of being seen, truly seen, by someone who understood what it meant to carry guilt that wasn't hers to bear. Tommy kissed away each tear while continuing to move inside her with increasing intensity, his body speaking truths that her mind was finally ready to hear.
"I can feel you," she whispered, her voice breaking with emotion. "I can feel myself coming back to life under your you."
"Good," Tommy replied, his breathing becoming ragged as their coupling intensified. "Feel everything, Ava. Feel how much you deserve to be loved; how much you deserve to be touched like you're precious instead of property."
Their movements became more urgent now, but the tenderness never left. Tommy's hands and mouth worshipping her body while Ava's fingers traced the scars on his chest, reading the stories of violence and survival written in raised flesh. Each touch felt like communion, like two broken souls finding wholeness in the joining of bodies and hearts.
"I can feel you thinking," Tommy gasped against her throat as their rhythm intensified. "Stop planning and just feel."
Ava let go of the careful control she'd maintained for twenty-three years, let herself be overwhelmed by sensation and emotion. Her fingernails dug into Tommy's shoulders as she arched beneath him, crying out with a voice she barely recognized as her own.
"That's it," Tommy encouraged, his breathing ragged with approaching climax. "Let me see who you really are underneath all that careful politeness. Show me the woman who's been hiding behind perfect smiles and polite silence."
When release finally crashed over her, Ava felt like she was being rewritten at the cellular level. Every nerve ending sang with pleasure and possibility, and for the first time in decades, she felt like herself rather than someone playing the role of Ava Wilde, politician's wife. The orgasm seemed to burn away years of accumulated shame, leaving her clean and new and ready to reclaim the life that had been stolen from her one small compromise at a time.
Tommy followed her over the edge, calling her name like a prayer as he emptied himself into her body. They collapsed together on sheets that smelled like secrets and humidity, breathing hard, their bodies slick with sweat and the kind of satisfaction that came from perfect understanding.
In the aftermath, as the red neon light painted patterns on the ceiling and the heat pressed against the windows like something alive, Tommy traced lazy patterns on Ava's bare shoulder.
"What happens now?" he asked.
Ava looked at the red dress on the floor, silk that had been designed for a gala where she'd planned to expose her husband's crimes before losing her nerve. Now it looked different somehow. Not like evidence of cowardice, but like armor she'd discarded because she was ready to fight without disguise.
"Now I go back," she said, surprised by the certainty in her voice. "I go back and I stand up at that gala and I tell everyone exactly what Richard has been doing with their money."
"That's dangerous. He has connections, resources, people who make problems disappear."
"So do you." Ava turned to face Tommy, seeing him clearly for the first time. "And so do I. Money, photographs, evidence, and twenty-three years of watching him operate. I know where the bodies are buried, metaphorically speaking."
Tommy's smile was proud and predatory in equal measure. "You want backup for this gala?"
"I want a partner," Ava said, the word feeling right in ways she'd never experienced. "Someone who understands that some fights are worth having even when you're outgunned."
"I know people who would pay good money for the kind of evidence you're carrying. People who could make sure Richard Wilde never hurts another child."
Ava felt something click into place, something that felt like purpose and possibility combined. "Then it sounds like we both have work to do."
They made love again as dawn threatened on the horizon, slower this time, with the deliberate attention of people who understood they were creating something new together. When Tommy moved inside her, Ava felt like she was becoming someone different, someone stronger, someone who deserved to be seen and touched and valued for more than her ability to smile and stay silent.
"I love your fire," Tommy whispered as they found their rhythm again. "I love watching you remember who you were before the world taught you to be small."
"Show me," Ava replied, wrapping her legs around him and pulling him deeper. "Show me who I can become."
When dawn threatened on the horizon but never arrived, just a pale suggestion that darkened back into eternal twilight, Ava Wilde was gone. In her place was someone who looked the same but carried herself differently, someone who moved with purpose instead of apology, someone who understood that being dangerous was better than being invisible.
Tommy checked out first, kissing her goodbye with promises to make contact through encrypted channels she hadn't known existed. His room key was left on the nightstand like evidence of a life he was finally ready to reclaim.
Ava dressed carefully in the red silk, the dress that had been meant for exposure but would now be worn for victory. She packed the photographs and bank records with the careful attention of someone preparing for war, tucked the cash into hidden compartments with the efficiency of someone who'd finally learned that survival sometimes required strategy.
In the registry, she signed her name one final time, but this signature was different. Stronger. More certain. The name of someone who'd decided to stop running and start fighting.
The night clerk watched her leave with knowing eyes. "Find what you were looking for?"
"I found something better," Ava replied. "I found what I was running toward."
Her Mustang started with a purr that sounded like satisfaction, and she drove back toward the life she'd fled three days earlier. But she wasn't the same woman who'd arrived at the Neon Palms carrying shame and fear and twenty-three years of accumulated cowardice.
She was someone who'd remembered that fire was meant to burn, that strength was meant to be used, that sometimes the most dangerous thing you could do was stop pretending to be harmless.
The charity gala was in four days. Richard would be expecting his perfect wife to return, chastened and apologetic, ready to resume her role as beautiful accessory to his monstrous empire.
Instead, he was going to get someone who understood that some battles were worth fighting even when you were outgunned, someone who'd learned that being reckless was sometimes the same thing as being brave.
Ava Wilde drove toward her future with windows down and music up, the red dress clinging to her like armor, the evidence in her trunk like ammunition for the war she was finally ready to fight.
Behind her, the Neon Palms settled back into its eternal twilight, waiting for the next lost soul who needed to discover that sometimes running away was just another way of running toward who you were meant to become.
The motel kept its secrets well, but Room 7 had a new story to add to its collection. A story about a woman who'd spent twenty-three years being invisible, who'd found her fire in the arms of a stranger, who'd learned that courage wasn't the absence of fear but the decision to act despite it.
At the Neon Palms Motel, every room told a story.
And every story changed the person who lived it.
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